Alii's notebook entry: Mar 15, 2011
I finished a book today. The author is awsome! He knows how to enjoy his life and really did it.
As the proverb goes, you can only young once. For this reason,I decide to do my utmost to live the life I want.
In addition, God bless Janpanese and Yunnan people.Everything will be fine!
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Alii's notebook entry: Mar 15, 2011
I finished a book today. The author is awsome! He knows how to enjoy his life and really did it.As the proverb goes, you can only be young once. For this reason, I've decided to do my utmost to live the life I want.
Good job! You wrote with few mistakes. Here are my suggestions for more authentic ways to express two of the sentences you wrote above:
"You can only be young once" ---> "You're only young once."
"I've decided to do my utmost to live the life I want." ---> "I've decided to do my best to live life to the fullest."
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