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My School
l was born in the Vietnamese provice of Vung Tau province, vietnam. I will introduce my school from 6 years old to 18 years old. This is my school life from age six to eighteen.
when I'm 6 years old, I started my education study in the Phan Chau Trinh Primary School. This school is very small and dilapidated needy. Each day Everyday, I walk to my school in 20 twenty minutes to school, I crossing a hill and a a stream.
When I was eleven i'm 11 years old, I studied in the Nguyen Hue Secondary School. This school which is beautiful. Every day, i go to school by bike, It take took me 30 thirty minutes by bicycleto go to school. It was during this time and here in this school that I fell in ,I have first love with a female classmate. girl in my class ????
At fifteen, when i'm 15 years old,I leave left my village and headed to the town of to go to Ngai Giao town where has for the Nguyen Du High School. I am fond of this famous school of , i study. I frond of Nguyen Du school, this school is famous in my province. I lived in student housing. a condo of school. This time, i have many good friends, i study dilygently to pass the university exam.
I talked my school so you talk your school to me.
I met many good friends and I studied diligently to pass the coming university entrance exams. I had talked about my school life. I would like to hear yours.
My School
l was born in Vung Tau Province, Vietnam. I will introduce my school from 6 years old to 18 years old.
When i'm I was 6 years old, I study studied in Phan Chau Trinh Primary School. This school was very small and needy. Everyday, i walking to my school in would take 20 minutes, I would cross a hill and a a stream.
When i'm I was 11 years old, I study in Nguyen Hue Secondary School. This school is beautiful. Every day, I would go to school by bike, it would take me 30 minutes to go get to school. In this school, I have had my first love with a girl in my class ????
when i'm I was 15 years old, i leave left my village to go to Ngai Giao Town where has Nguyen Du high school was where I study studied. I frond I am fond of Nguyen Du School, this school is famous in my province. I live in a condo of at school. This time, I have many good friends, I study studied dilygently diligently to pass the university exam.
I talked about my school so you talk your school to me tell me about yours.
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You need to work on past tense and your grammar.
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