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英 》汉,translating to Chinese 我学中国话只一月。(I've been studying Chinese for a month.) I'm trying to translate these ten sentences and would be happy if someone helped me with correcting them :) I have the sentences in Swedish as well. 1. Old Wang asks me to speak Chinese 老王请我说中国话。 2. He asks if she eats French food 他问她吃不吃法国菜。 3. I and mister Zhang are both from Shanghai 我跟张先生都是上海人。 4. Excuse me, this money won't suffice 对不起,这钱不够。 5. Both my children are small 我(的?)二个孩子都是小。 6. Mrs Li can drink half a bottle of spirits 李太太能喝半瓶酒。 7. We don't have any guests tonight. 今天晚上我们不有客人。 8. Whose book do you want to buy? 你要买谁的书? 9. Does your friend like reading Chinese books? 你的朋友喜欢看中文书不喜欢? 10. I want to drink some water 我要喝点儿水。

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英 》汉,translating to Chinese

我学中国话只有一月。(I've been studying Chinese for a month.)
I'm trying to translate these ten sentences and would be happy if someone helped me with correcting them :) I have the sentences in Swedish as well.

1. Old Wang asks me to speak Chinese
老王请让我说中国话。

2. He asks if she eats French food
他问她吃不吃法国菜。

3. I and mister Zhang are both from Shanghai
我跟张先生都是上海人。

4. Excuse me, this money won't suffice
对不起,这钱不够。

5. Both my children are small
我(的?)二个孩子都是小。

6. Mrs Li can drink half a bottle of spirits
李太太能喝半瓶酒。

7. We don't have any guests tonight.
今天晚上我们不没有客人。

8. Whose book do you want to buy?
你要想买谁的书。     (want想,will要) 

9. Does your friend like reading Chinese books?
你的朋友喜不喜欢看中文书不喜欢?

10. I want to drink some water
我要喝点儿水。

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英 》汉,translating to Chinese

我学中国话只一月。(I've been studying Chinese for a month.)

 

* If "我学汉语已有一个月了", the answer is "I've been studying Chinese for a month."

* If "我学中国话只一月", the answer is "I've been studying Chinese for only one month."


I'm trying to translate these ten sentences and would be happy if someone helped me with correcting them :) I have the sentences in Swedish as well.

1. Old Wang asks me to speak Chinese
老王请我说中国话。

* Why do you tranlate "Ask me" to "请我“? Please donot use "请” here, that sounds your Chinese speaking is veeeeeery precious. The currest one is "老王让我说中文"

2. He asks if she eats French food
他问她吃不吃法国菜。

3. I and mister Zhang are both from Shanghai
我跟张先生都是上海人。

 

* Usually we put "Mr Zhang" before "i", so:

* Mr Zhang and me are both from Shanghai.

* 张先生同我都是上海人

4. Excuse me, this money won't suffice
对不起,这钱不够。

 

* I don't think this is a local expression, at least in Au.

* "this money won't suffice" --> "the pay is not enough."


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英 》汉,translating to Chinese Translating from your English

我学中国话只一月。(I've been studying Chinese for a month.) 我学了一个月的中文
I'm trying to translate these ten sentences and would be happy if someone helped me with correcting them :) I have the sentences in Swedish as well.

1. Old Wang asks me to speak Chinese
老王请我说中国话。 老王叫我说中文

2. He asks if she eats French food
他问她吃不吃法国菜。 他问她喜欢吃法囯菜[式]

3. I and mister Mr. Zhang and I are both from Shanghai
我跟张先生和我都是从上海来的人。 What you wrote is "Mr. Zhang and I are Shanghainese".  Though the meaning is the same but translation is inaccurate.

4. Excuse me, this money won't suffice
对不起,这些钱是不够的。 This way is nicer way of putting things unless your "suffice" carries resentment.

5. Both my children are small
我两(的?)二个孩子都还是小。 This is more natural in Chinese even though it accurately translates as "Both my childre are STILL small."

6. Mrs Li can drink half a bottle of alcohol  spirits Old fashion English
李太太只能喝半瓶[的]酒。

7. We don't have any guests tonight.
今天晚上我们沒不有客人。

8. Whose book do you want to buy?
你要买谁的书?

9. Does your friend like reading Chinese books?
你的朋友喜欢看中文书嗎不喜欢?

10. I want to drink some water
我要喝些点儿水。What you wrote is  "bit of".  Hence not accurate from your English.
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英 》汉,translating to Chinese 我学中国话只一月。(I've been studying Chinese for a month.) I'm trying to translate these ten sentences and would be happy if someone helped me with correcting them :) I have the sentences in Swedish as well. 1. Old Wang asks me to speak Chinese 老王让我说中国话。(我觉得这样更好一些) 2. He asks if she eats French food 他问她吃不吃法国菜。 3. I and mister Zhang are both from Shanghai 我跟张先生都是上海人。 4. Excuse me, this money won't suffice 对不起,这钱不够。 5. Both my children are small 我的两个孩子都还小。 6. Mrs Li can drink half a bottle of spirits 李太太能喝半瓶酒。 7. We don't have any guests tonight. 今天晚上我们没有客人。 8. Whose book do you want to buy? 你要买谁的书? 9. Does your friend like reading Chinese books? 你的朋友喜不喜欢看中文书? 10. I want to drink some water 我想喝点儿水。

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