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Hi, everybody, I'm David and i I am write writing from Italy. I live in a town called Udine, in the north-east northeastern part of Italy, in a region named called Friuli Venezia Giulia. As I said, if you look at the map of Italy, you can find Udine in the upper-righter part of it, upper right part of the map near the borders between of Italy and Slovenia and Italy and Austria.
The italian Italian city more most well known near Udine is Venice (at south-west). southwest of Udine.
I think i've I've just wrote a great disaster, so I am wait waiting for you your sugestions.
Next time I will write something more, especially about my person. myself.

Thanks, guys.... :)

Hi David, this was a nice effort my friend! Don't feel bad about your writing skills, your learning and mistakes are a part of learning. :) I noticed several grammar issues mostly with first person I, or I've type words. I also noted a few directional mistakes when point out things using directions such as soutwest, and upper right. If you would like I'd be happy to help you improve and practice your English. If you have any questions please let me know and I'd be happy to help you!

Ok, I start...

Hi, everybody: I'm David and  I am writing from Italy. I live in a town called Udine, in the North-East of Italy, in a region named Friuli Venezia Giulia. As I said, if you look at the map of Italy, you can find Udine in the upper-righter part of it, near the borders between Italy and Slovenia and Italy and Austria.
The Italian city which is more well  known near Udine is Venice (at south-west).
I think i've just written  great disaster, so I am waiting for  you sugestions.
Next time I will write something more, especially about myself.

Thanks, guys.... :)

Pretty good for your first attempt I would say.Welcome to Italki, David!