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my new year's aim Today is Chinese new year.I am happy very much.I taked many photos with my families. A big family had dinner together.They were laughing at me fat. I was so angry. so ,my new year's aim 1 ,lose my weight 2.improve my English 3.get a good major Work hard!

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my new year's aim

Today is Chinese new year.I am very happy .I took many photos with my family. My family had dinner together.They were laughing at my fat. I am so angry(unhappy). 
Here ,my new year's aim
1 ,lose weight
2.improve my English
3.get a good major 
Work harder!
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My new year's aim

Today is Chinese new year. I am very happy very much. I taked took many photos with my familyies. Our big family had dinner together. They were laughing at me for getting fat. I was so angry.
So, my new year's aim:
1. Lose my weight
2. Improve my English
3. Get a good major
Work hard!

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