很多马
今天，我附近我的房屋看见了7匹马。我即将拍摄了一张照片，但是我的手机死了。
我不要尝试乘骑一匹马因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
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很多马
今天，我附近我的房屋看见了7匹马。我即将拍摄了一张照片，但是我的手机死了。
我不要尝试乘骑一匹马因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
一下是一些词组
Near:在...附近
i was about to do sth.:我正要做...
horses were dirty:它们（马）很脏| 不需要“是”
手机死了：手机【死机】了
So.
今天，我在房子附近看见了7匹马。我正要拍些照片的时候我的手机死机了。（当时）我没想骑任何一匹因为它们很脏。
I'm pleased to 修改你的作文。
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很多马
今天，我附近我在的我房屋附近看见了7匹马。我即将打算拍摄了一张照片，但是我的手机死机了。
我不要没有尝试乘骑一匹马因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
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很多马
今天，我附近我的房屋看见了7匹马。我拍摄了一张照片，但是我的手机死了。
我不要尝试乘骑一匹马因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
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Hi~~读了你的几篇小作文之后，我发现你的语法，尤其是句子结构，掌握得不太好，像是在一对一地翻译英文单词（As if you translated the English words one by one）。如果你把语法提高了，中文应该提高得很快哦~ 加油加油！！
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很多马
今天，我在附近我的房屋附近看见了7匹马。我即将正要拍摄了一张照片，但是我的手机死机了。
我不要想尝试乘骑一匹马，因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
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