很多马
今天,我附近我的房屋看见了7匹马。我即将拍摄了一张照片,但是我的手机死了。
我不要尝试乘骑一匹马因为它们是很脏。
Today, Near my house I saw 7 horses. I was about to take some pictures but my phone died. ;\
I didn't try to ride one of the horses because they were dirty.
一下是一些词组
Near:在...附近
i was about to do sth.:我正要做...
horses were dirty:它们(马)很脏| 不需要“是”
手机死了:手机【死机】了
So.
今天,我在房子附近看见了7匹马。我正要拍些照片的时候我的手机死机了。(当时)我没想骑任何一匹因为它们很脏。
I'm pleased to 修改你的作文。