你好大家！
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
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你好大家！大家好！
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
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你好大家！
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
Hello! If you want to get into the confusing syntax details of Chinese, it would be more "authentic" to omit 和 in your second sentence and replace it with a series comma: 我喜欢听音乐、看电影。Using "and" all the time can come off as a little bit Chinglish.
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你好大家！大家好！（the order is wrong~)
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
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大家好！
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
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你好大家！
大家好!
你好我叫 Hal 我今年20岁。我喜欢听音乐和看电影。再见。
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