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Best wishes to the victims and their families in Kunming railway station Big tragedy happened in Kunming railway station yesterday. 29 victims are reported so far. Because everyone has read about the news so I don't want to repeat its context. And another reason is each time when I repeat the story I couldn't help sobbing in tears. Think, please everyone think for the hopeless and sorrowful family members of the victims who were defendless. Yesterday when I went to the church I prayed for them with all my tears. Wish them peaceful.

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Best wishes to the victims and their families in Kunming railway station

A Big tragedy happened took place in Kunming railway station yesterday. 29 victims are were reported dead so far. Because Since everyone has had read about the news, so I don't want to repeat its context content again. And Another reason is was that each time when I repeat talked about the story I couldn't help sobbing in tears. Think, please Everyone please think(pray?) for the hopeless and sorrowful family members of the victims who were defendless. Yesterday, when I went to the church, I prayed for them with all my tears heart. I wish them peaceful that they will be blessed.

 

Tried my best :3

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Best wishes to the victims at Kunming railway station and their families in Kunming railway station

A big tragedy happened in at Kunming railway station yesterday. 29 victims were reported dead so far. Because everyone has read about it in the news so I don't want to repeat it here. And Another reason is that each  time when I repeat the story I couldn't   can't help sobbing in tears. Think, please Everyone think for the hopeless and sorrowful  please give a thought to the familys of the victims who were defendless defenceless. Yesterday when I went to the church I prayed for them with all my in tears. I wish them peace ful.

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Would you please help me with it. ︶︿︶
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Thank you. But I'm a little bit sad because it seems there is no one would like to help me with my entry.
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Karen , I have read about that horiffying accident on the railways station, that s really awful . I am very sorry for those who were killed and their families , And God save the victims of the horrific attack. It seems as if this world has gone mad!!!!!!!

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