The Origin Of The Rain

A very Long long long ago, [After correcting your entire essay, you cannot use this phrase.  This is because it still rains today and you tell us not to be hate it.]The lung Dragon King lived in the bottom of the sea. He is the king of the sea lived at the bottom of the ocean. His He has three beautiful daughters are very beautiful especially the youngest girl. The little girl is so cute, and So beautiful was she that everybody everyone loves her. If Whenever she feeles feels sad and cried, it will be her tears become the rainy. That's why rain comes out. So please don't hate the rain because it's is the tears of the lung girl's tears of the dragon princess.

Just a story, please don't take it seriously.

The Origin Of The Rain

Long, long, long ago, the lung King lived in on the bottom of the sea.  He is was the king of the sea. His three daughters are were very beautiful, especially the youngest girl. The little girl is was so cute, and everybody loved her. If she feeles felt sad and cried, it would rain. will be rainy. That's why it rains comes out. So, please don't hate the rain, because it's the lung girl's tears.

This is just a story, please don't take it seriously.