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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am an editor of a newspaper office ,which edite newspaper for highschool student . i feel like doing many things everyday ,and so i 'm always feeling happieness. i would like to kown more about other countries and find a friend here . i

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm an editor of a newspaper at an office that edits (produces/creates/makes?) a newspaper for highschool students. I feel like doing many different things everyday ,and so I'm always happy. I would like to know more about other countries (cultures) and find a friend here.


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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am an editor of a newspaper at an office ,which edites a newspaper for highschool students . i feel like doing many things everyday ,and so i 'm always feeling happypieness. i would like to known more about other countries and find a friend here . (you could say "make friends here" too)

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