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[What Sandra said ^^, plus:]
The begining beginning
I have found italki by chance when I was doing some researches on internet. It seems a good place to make friends, share experiences, improve my English and, who knows, learn others languages like Italian, for example. Beside become fluent in a foreign language and make friends along the way, I can help some of these new friends interested in learn Portuguese.
I like to travel so much. It is funny (funny = que se hace reír) and, in my opinion, it´s the most interesting way of knowing a little bit about new cultures.
"Knowing" doesn't quite sound like the right word choice for what you're trying to say. I think you're going for "finding out/learning" about new cultures.
In English, "to know" isn't used as an action verb:
-Yesterday I *knew how to swim. (Better: Yesterday I learned how to swim.)
In the context of acquiring information, "to know" is better used to express a continuing state of being, in this case, that you've known something for a while:
-I know a lot of Spanish because I learned it in school.
-I know about other cultures because I found out a lot about them when I was traveling.
I am so glad for joining the italki community.
Another construction that doesn't sound quite right. It would go better as "I'm so glad I joined..." ("I'm so glad that I joined" but the "that" linking the two clauses can be omitted in English).
Good luck with your English! :-)
The begining
I have found italki by chance when I was doing some research/searches on the internet. It seems like a good place to make friends, share experiences, improve my English and, who knows, learn other languages like Italian, for example. Besides becoming fluent in a foreign language and making friends along the way, I can help some of these new friends that are/if they are interested in learning Portuguese.
I like travel so much. It is funny fun and, in my opinion, it´s the most interesting way of knowing a little bit about new cultures.
Funny = engraçado. Fun= divertido.
I am so glad for joining the italki community.
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Welcome to Italki! Im new here to, just joined yesterday. Good job with the writing, keep it up. :)
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