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Preparing FCE exam,Please,Could anyone correct this?-thanks! I must answer the question in 120-150 words in an appropiate style. The question is: I have just received an email from my English friend Alex asking if I´d like to go to a concert by my favourite bad,Red Stone. And this is my answer: Dear Alex Thanks a lot for your email.I have been waiting for you for two weeks.Are you really telling me which Red Stone are going to come to the city on 21 of July?, If it´s true I really want to go! it´s awesome!. Don´t worry if you don´t know so much about them, they are one of the kind.They have recorded six albums arround the world.Theirs songs have been number one in England for one year. I would prefer to be stand because when the concert starts we are jumping and shoutting crazily. I´m pleased for your hospitality and I think that the day after the concert we could have to go to the theater to watch the last Steven Spielberg movie Can´t wait to see you All the best Mario

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Preparing FCE exam,Please,Could anyone correct this?-thanks!

I must answer the question in 120-150 words in an appropiate style.

The question is: I have just received an email from my English friend Alex asking if I´d like to go to a concert by my favourite bad,Red Stone.

And this is my answer:

Dear Alex

Thanks a lot for your email.  I have been waiting for you for two weeks.  Are you really telling me which Red Stone are going to come to the city on 21 of July?, If it´s true I really want to go! it´s That's awesome!.
Don´t worry if you don´t know so much about them, they are one of the a kind.They have recorded six albums arround the world.Theirs songs have been number one in England for one year.

I would prefer to be stand because when the concert starts we are will be jumping and shoutting crazily.

I´m pleased for your hospitality  Thank you for inviting me, and I think that the The day after the concert we could have to go to the theater to watch the last latest Steven Spielberg movie.

Can´t wait to see you! 

All the best, 

Mario

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