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This is my homework. Is it right? plese help me. Anyone enter high school in Korea. They studied hard until three years and choose the course they want. Usually go to college or workplace. I chose to go to college. Because school is a wonderful time So, I wanted to study more in college. I could feel the difference while undergoing three years of high school and college . The difference between the two schools has found. There is Ewha Girls' High School and Kangwon National University.The first discussion was the location.Ewha Girls' High School is placed to Seoul. Ewha Girls' High School located Seoul City Hall and the police station of the center is known for its awesome seascapes around. Near Deoksugung and doldamgil attract many tourist. Also, this spot is used as a shooting location( movie or drama is often use this street.) The school's walls with murals painted school students. However, Kangwon National University located in Gangwon Province. There has a beautiful natural environment. If you're up on the hill , you can see enjoy the sea at any time. A variety of lush trees that animals such as birds can see. Ewha Girls' High School has beauty of the city and Kangwon National University has the beauty of nature. The two schools have a different history. That is the second difference.Ewha Girls' High School has a very long history. Ewha was built by missionaries before roughly 100 years. Ewha Girls' High School is already far passed 100 years. Because of there is much history and tradition, both student and teachers Are proud. Ewha Girls' High School made the mark and even the production of several products and are proud it has all students attend. Ewha Girls' High School of Memorial Building was built, and the place was wanted to tour by visitors. On the other hand, Kangwon National University started named Samcheok. Over time turned into Kangwon National University. Although the history is short, but is growing rapidly. Kangwon National University, the future than the past, the school is expected.

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Anyone can enter to the high school in Korea. They study hard until the third year and then they can choose the course they want. Usually it could be choosen between going to college or to workplace. I chosed to go to college, because the staying at school is a wonderful time. So, I wanted to study more at college. I could feel the difference between undergoing three years of high school and doing the same at college.

I found the difference between the school where I went before and the college where I'm attending currently. Those places are the Ewha Girls' High School and the Kangwon National University.
The first discussion was about the location. The Ewha Girls' High School is located at the Seoul City Hall and the central police station, which is located there, is known for its awesome seascapes that are around it.
Deoksugung and doldamgil attract many tourist. Also, this spot is used as a shooting location( movie or drama is often used at this street). On the school's walls there are murals that were painted by the students .

However, Kangwon National University is located in the Gangwon Province. There is a beautiful natural environment in there. If you're up on the hill , you can see and enjoy the sea anytime. There are a variety of lush trees where animals such as birds can be seen.

The Ewha Girls' High School has the beauty of the city and Kangwon National University has the beauty of nature.
The two pleaces have a different history. That is the second difference I found. The Ewha Girls' High School has a very long history. It was built by missionaries before roughly 100 years. This School is already more than 100 years. Because of there is much history and tradition, both student and teachers are proud.

The Ewha Girls' High School made the mark (or it could be  "made the difference" too). Even it made the difference on the production of several products and it is a pride that it has all those students attending there.

The Ewha Girls' High School was built as a memorial building, and it's a wanted place to visit by turists. On the another hand, the Kangwon National University started being named as "Samcheok". Over time turned into "Kangwon National University".

Although the history its short, it is growing rapidly. This university is more expected for its future than remembered for its past.


I did a past correction abotu a part of your homework, but within my last correction I forgot to correct somethings. So, now I tried to correct your homework as much as I could.

I hope you progress very good about your english learning! :)

 

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