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We encounter on a drizzling day (a rendition for lyrics) 相识烟雨间, 脉脉两情牵.断桥依旧在, 心事成云烟.我独自留恋, 你身在天边.回眸那一眼 ,伞下的少年. We encounter on a drizzling day, All my worries fade away.laden with affections even apart , O’ thither the broken bridge remains,. I hold an attachment in vain,as you are roving far away,only glancing back on you, while you held the umbrella in the rain

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We encounter on a drizzling day (a rendition for lyrics)

相识烟雨间, We meet under the mists and rain,

脉脉两情牵. In two veins, two love surging through.

断桥依旧在, The Broken Bridge still remain,

 

心事成云烟.  Affairs of the heart had turned into clouds and mists.

我独自留恋,  Only me, alone in yearning

你身在天边.  Now you are at Heaven's edge,

回眸那一眼 , Once more, you glanced back,

伞下的少年.  [remembering] once how we met.  [Literally, [remembering] the youth under the umbrella]

 

I translated the last line figuratively because, it was a poem recalling the past of Madame White Snake as she was returning to heaven.  Great Chinese poem.

We encounter on a drizzling day, All my worries fade away.laden with affections even apart , O’ thither the broken bridge remains,. I hold an attachment in vain,as you are roving far away,only glancing back on you, while you held the umbrella in the rain

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The more I read this, the more it gives me to think about! Thanks.

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