First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello world~
I want to learn English. If I can speak english well, I meet another new world!
(new people, new culture, new place!)

In fact, there is a  pressing problem.

Next month (Nov 1~4 2010), I must teach oral skills to a (put a in the sentence if there is only 1 foreigner) foreigner with my poor english (it is redundant to put skills at the end of this sentence because the subject has already been implied).

So I need help (do not put a period at the end of this part because, the sentence is too short so add a ,), I need to practice conversational english.

Help me please.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello world!

I want to learn English. If I can speak English well, I meet another new worlds!
(New people, new cultures, new places!)

In fact, there is some urgency to learn English because
at next month (Nov 1~4 2010), I must teach language skills to foreigners with my poor English skills.

So I need help.  I need to practice English conversation.

Help me please.

잘 했어요.  Practice capitalization and plurals.

(빨간)  Red              = 대문자  Capitalized

 (파란)  Blue            =  정정 & 철자  Correction and Spelling

 (녹색)  Green         =  더 자연적인 방법으로   More natural way

 (자주색)  Purple    =  내 생각에 / 코멘트 /  제안  I think, my comment or suggestion

 (밑줄)  Underline   = 구두점과 띄어쓰기  Punctuation &/or  spacing