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Opening sentences - please comment I bought the magazine because of the big blue title on its cover page: “All a lost generation”. It intrigued my mind and couldn’t wait to get home in my confortable room and read the article. All my way home questions and answers were popping up on my head, trying to bring arguments against such an accusation. Our generation lives in freedom, surrounded by the most advanced high technology and benefits from the faster way its values and talents to get internationally recognized.

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Opening sentences - please comment

I bought the magazine because of the big blue title on its cover page: “All a lost generation”. It intrigued me mind and I couldn’t wait to get home to my comfortable room and read the article. All the way home, questions and answers were popping into my head, trying to bring arguments against such an accusation. Our generation lives in freedom, surrounded by the most advanced high technology, and benefits from the faster way its values and talents to get internationally recognized.

Your last sentence is difficult to understand clearly, Medana.  Pan and Nancy have created 2 possible revisions; I have added a 3rd through the strategic use of a comma.  For clarity, it might have been better if you had written it as 2 separate sentences.
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Opening sentences - please comment

I bought the magazine because of the big blue title on its cover page: “All a lost generation”. It intrigued my mind and couldn’t wait to get home in to my confortable room and read the article. All my the way home questions and answers were popping up on my head, trying to bring arguments against such an accusation. Our generation lives in freedom, surrounded by the most advanced high technology and benefits from the faster way its values and  this technology is used to discover talents talented people and to get makes them internationally recognized.
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Opening sentences - please comment

I bought the magazine because of the big blue title on its cover page: “All< ? A Lost Generation”. It intrigued my me and couldn’t wait to get home in my confortable room and read the articles.  On the way home questions and answers kept popping into my head, trying to bring arguments against such an accusation. Our generation lives in freedom surrounded by the most advanced high technology.  Our generation  benefits from  this high technology to reveal it's talents and become. internationally recognized.

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