But Despite her ordeal, she survived - she was rescued by a stranger. Though her respiratory tract was damaged burnt, she could breathe, but she wasn't no longer able to speak. Now she has a special tube in her larynx that to allows her to speak. voice   , but she lost Her voice was completely gone. When she was lying recuperating in a the hospital, she knew that her looks would be totally unimaginable.  she looked differently, She had a phone with camera, but she wasn't never brave enough to take herself a photo of herself.

Then in a lift, she epsied herself in the mirror and she was shocked to see a grotesque/ghastly/unrecognizable figure before her.  She saw herself for the first time in a mirror in a lift. She got frightened. Now her family is worried even when she walks with a the dog for too long. much time - If she is in trouble, she wouldn't be able to calling for help will be impossible - nobody would can hear her.

Why am I telling you this story do I tell that? The woman is a hairdresser in my little town and an aunt of my friend.  firend's aunt, She used to be my neighbour. The father's Her brother-in-law maintains our my internet connection network.

You never know what will happens in your neighbourhood. You never know if someone suffers agony just is in a living hell on the other side of the wall. Excellent conclusion!

Very good.  However, it would make the story better if you tell what happened to the  psycho father-in-law as well.  Without this, the story is not satisfying.  It's like like going to an expensive and fancy restaurant and still coming home in great hunger!

When stories from TV happen in your neighbourhood [please correct]

What I am correcting you may not be grammatically wrong.  Just a better way to tell a story.  Everyone likes an exciting or an interesting one.  So if you want to write such essays, you need to learn the art of storytelling.

There was an ordinary family. A normal family consisting of a father, a mother, father and their two children. Their life was so normal that you can never imagine that something wrong and terrible can happen. couldn't have thought there was something wrong. But As with life, indeed something that wrong and terrible did happened.

Some time ago, the head of the family father died in a car accident. It was a nightmare for the family, but we all know that people die in that people do die in such kind of accidents every single day. Nothing out of the ordinary.  Finally, they got In the end, the family overcame their grief and began to live their normal life again, this time used to living without her beloved husband and the father of her children.

However, fate was not to smile favourably at them.  The evil came in the form of her  there were another problems to be bred - problems with woman's former in-laws.
They were trying to make her life unpleasant as much as they could.  Without any with no rationalilty,  reasons for it. They were they watched ing her every step of hers, criticizing the way she looked and dressed.  It was as if she was the cause of death to their son.  They (clothes, make-up etc.), threatened ing her to no end. They just made her life miserable as they could, tormenting her like demons from hell.

Now, before the accident the family used to live in a house which was given to them by her in-laws.  father's parents. Both father and mother of them had sunk a fortune into that place. invested a lot of money in it. After the tragic accident, event she the daughter-in-law, along with their grandchildren, was forced to leave their home. it (with the children, of course). I must emphasize that she was not kicked out of the place.  They just made sure that life for her became so unbearable... - in-laws had spoiled her stay so much that she just run away. Furthermore - Adding salt to the wounds, [or you can say, "adding insult to injury"] she had to pay the bills for the place that , although she didn't does not live in the house any longer.

The situation became so bad that made her she too scared for feared going out alone. Her nightmare was forever tagging along.  didn't stop lasting.

Eventually, here comes the culminating point of the story. Then on the nineteenth of March, she went back to her former home to get some of her stuff back.  Before a single word was exchanged, the  She met her former father-in-law in his house - she was to take some of her things back. There was no time to say a single word - the man threw petrol or something with a similar smell) on her and lit a match. Fire Flames engulfed her body in a within seconds.  - Her hands, her torso, arms and legs... stomach, back, legs, face, Even her lungs!