this day is my father's birthday, I want to give him one bottle whine. My father likes to drink one cup of wine only when he is with his friends.

我爸的生日

這天是我爸的生日我要送他一瓶酒

我爸唯有跟他的朋友在一起時才會淺嘗一杯

我爸的生日

今日是我爸的生日，我要给他一个瓶酒。我爸喜欢喝一杯酒，只是同他的朋友喝。

Transcription: this day is my father's birthday, I want to give him one bottle whine. My father likes to drink one cup of wine only when he is with his friends.
Translation: Today is my father's birthday, I want to give him a bottle of whine. My father drinks a cup of whine only when he is among friends.

我爸的生日

这日今天是我爸的生日，我要给他一个酒瓶一瓶酒。我爸和他的朋友在一起时喜欢喝一杯酒除非他是同他的俦
Transcription: this day is my father's birthday, I want to give him one bottle whine. My father likes to drink one cup of wine only when he is with his friends.
Translation: Today is my father's birthday, I want to give him a bottle of whine. My father drinks a cup of whine only when he is among friends.

Correction:

今天是我爸爸的生日，我想送给他一瓶酒。

我爸爸和他的朋友在一起时喜欢喝一杯酒。

today: 今天

a bottle of wine: 一瓶酒 （一个酒瓶 means "a winebottle"）

like: 喜欢

when XXXX：（当）XXXX时 or （当）XXXX的时候

sb. be with sb. : sb.和sb.在一起

我爸的生日

这日今天是我爸的生日，我要给他一个瓶酒瓶。我爸喜欢一次喝一杯酒，除非当他是同和他的俦朋友在一起的时候。
Transcription: this day is my father's birthday, I want to give him one bottle whine. My father likes to drink one cup of wine only when he is with his friends.
Translation: Today is my father's birthday, I want to give him a bottle of whine. My father drinks a cup of whine only when he is among friends.