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Gay marriage and adoption Today in France there was a demonstration against the proposal of extending the rights of adoption for homosexual couples. This event impressed me and provoked a reflection. It's not natural that two men or women can grow a child, but it's more sad to think to children can grow alone in a orphanage without love and warmth of a family. In Italy there is not the possibility of adoption for homosexuals (and the marriage) but this already exists in other European countries. Another thing is that many heterosexual families created problems to their children even if there is a father and a mother. So it's a problem of our society to accept this new type of family and I think that we should to break some prejudices. The most important thing is to keep an open mind and to choose the better thing for the children.

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Gay Marriage and Adoption

 

Today in France, there was a demonstration against the proposal of extending the rights of adoption for homosexual gay [except in scientific journals etc, this term is considered offensive in English.] couples. This event impressed me and provoked a reflection on myself.

It's is not natural that two men or women can grow rear a child.  [It was argued that a single parent cannot do as well.  No matter what, it is a fallacy to think that children would grow up good in a family with the father and mother in it]. However, but it's more it is even sadder to think to see children can growing alone in a orphanage without the love and warmth of a family. In Italy, there is not the possibility of adoption for homosexuals (and the marriage) a gay couple adopting a child let alone having gay marriages. but However, this sort of arrangements already exists in other European countries. Another thing is that many heterosexual Even in a straight [Again, "heterosexual", when not used in scientific literature is considered a derogatory term used by gays!] families family, there will be   created child problems to their children even if there is a father and a mother.

So it's Therefore a problem it is the responsibility of our society to accept this new type of family and I think that we should to break some prejudices should be eliminated. The most important thing is to keep an open mind and to choose the better thing best for the children.

 

Good logical thoughts.  Write more and you will be able to express better in English. :)

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Gay marriage and adoption

Today in France there was a demonstration against the proposal of extending the rights of adoption for homosexual couples. This event impressed me and provoked a reflection.

It's not natural that for two men or two women can grow to raise a child, but it's more sad to think to that children can grow up alone in a orphanages without love and without the warmth of a family. In Italy there is not the possibility of adoption for by homosexuals (and the or marriage) but this already exists in other European countries. Another thing is that many heterosexual families created problems to for their children even if there is a father and a mother.

So it's a problem of Our society needs to accept this new type of family and I think that we should to break some prejudices. The most important thing is to keep an open mind and to choose the better thing what's best for the children.

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