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Is there any way to make this small short text more "fluent" easier to read. Use shorter sentences if you want to read them aloud instead reading it in your mind.
Next week, the official lectures will begin officially in my university. There are a lot of many difficult (procedures) to follow. The Lecture plans Class schedules are chaotic: we are expected to choose our lectures them even before theese they are presented given to us. I was really confused., as I've slept for just a few hours because of the tension buildup in trying to sort things out. towards this stressing experience.
As a result, I have spoiled failed to get into my third lecture and I had to arrange this this morning. [I am guessing that you overslept. I am not sure if you did not know about this lecture until this morning.]
The good part of it, is that I'm I am glad that I am not the only one who did not get into it. to have failed in the subscribing. That's However, how I have made I made new contacts (friends), even though I had forgotten most of their names of most of them... No problem here because but it's all right, as we will certainly meet again informally, for collaborative projects, homework collective work, or home work or even parties! A sure bet! (and that's sure!). Today I've seen, interesting people, trying to look ordinary and vice versa. Then there are others boring people, trying to make themselves interesting and people who just simply don't care.
And It's so cool here, weatherwise, that is. (I mean the weather..) and There is much the news talk about how it will influence going through the area cities. Terrible news! It's horrible. So I'm looking for a warmer jacket now!
PS: Please try to correct it even if it's just to make it sound better. thx :) Thanks!
Is there any way to make this small text more "fluent" to read
Next week the official lectures begin in my university. There are a lot of difficult (procedures) to follow. The lecture plans are chaotic: We are expected to choose our lectures even before theese they are presented to us. I was really confused, as i had only slept for a few hours due to the stress this situation caused. I've slept just few hours because of the tension towards this stressing experience.
As a result I didnt manage spoiled to get into my third lecture and I had to arrange this this morning.
The good part of it, is that I'm not the only one to have failed in the subscribing. That's how I have made new contacts (friends), even though I have forgotten most of their names ( this sounds better) I' forgotten the name of most of them ... but it's all right, as we will certainly meet informally, for collective work, or home work or even parties (and that's sure!). Today I've seen, interasting people, trying to look ordinary, boring people, trying to make themselves interesting and people who just don't care.
And It's so cool here (I mean the weather..) and the news talk about influence going through the cities. It's horrible. I'm looking for a warmer jacket. ( i'm not sure what you mean here, I think the word influence is not quite right here.)
PS: Please try to correct even if it's just to make it sound better, thx :)
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