My favorite movie
My favorite movie is the movie named <time machine>, the movie mainly describe a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travelling through different period of time. I love this movie because I gained many valuable things from it, not only some basic physical knowledge but also many emotional feelings.
First, I get basic physical knowledge from this fiction movie. Personally, I love physics very much and always fascinated in such classical physic theories—the big bang, the universal of our cosmos, and so on. In the movie <time machine>, I can get access to many physical theories, it really excited me.
Secondly, the plot of this movie convey a massage to its audiences—cherish your family and your lover, they would not come back once they leave. Although with a time machine, the actor can not save his well-loved girlfriend’s life which lost in a traffic accident. The history can not be revised, even with a time machine, so the only way for us is to appreciate life and cherish our lover, family members, and our friends.
Last but not least, the movie sparkle people’s imagination. The movie is fiction, but human’s imagination is true. In reality, we have not invent a time machine yet, but only imagine it first can we have the chance to make our dream come true. Just as Albert Einstein said that: Imagination is more important than knowledge. So I think it is also one of the value of this movie—sparkle people’s imagination and let us more creative.
In summary, I like the movie <time machine> because it conveys some physical knowledge (which I loved), convey the emotional feelings let us cherish family and friends, and made people filled with imagination and become more creative.
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My Favorite Movie (All "important" words in a title are capitalized in English!)
My favorite movie is the movie named "Time Machine". The movie mainly describes a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travelFirst, I got basic physical knowledge (see note above) from this fictional movie. Personally, I love physics very much and have always been fascinated
Secondly, the plot of this movie conveys a message to its audience
Last but not least, the movie sparks people’s imagination. The movie is fictional, but a human’s (I would use "person's" rather than "human's")imagination is true. In reality, we have not invented a time machine yet, (this following phrase is difficult ->) but only imagine it first can we have the chance to make our dream come true. (Perhaps I would say, "but then again, dreams come true are really just someone's imagination put to action.")
In summary, I like the movie "Time Machine" because it conveys some physical knowledge (again, I would say "knowledge of physics") (which I loved),
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My favorite movie
My favorite movie is the movie named "time machine", the movie mainly describe a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travelNote : "but many emotional feelings" is a little awkwardly expressed. It would sound better as ... "but also a strong emotional response."
Firstly, I get basic physics (physical has a different meaning from physics) knowledge from this fictional movie. Personally, I love physics very much and always fascinated in such classical physics theories—the big bang, the universal of our cosmos, and so on. In the movie "time machine", I
Secondly, the plot of this movie conveys a message to its audiences—cherish your family and your lover, they would not come back once they leave. (better as ... Once they are gone, they will never come back)
Last but not least, the movie
Note: sparkle is not ever used in this context. Better choices are "fires" "stokes" "inspires" the imagination.
In summary, I like the movie "time machine" because it conveys some physics
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