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My favorite movie My favorite movie is the movie named <time machine>, the movie mainly describe a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travelling through different period of time. I love this movie because I gained many valuable things from it, not only some basic physical knowledge but also many emotional feelings. First, I get basic physical knowledge from this fiction movie. Personally, I love physics very much and always fascinated in such classical physic theories—the big bang, the universal of our cosmos, and so on. In the movie <time machine>, I can get access to many physical theories, it really excited me. Secondly, the plot of this movie convey a massage to its audiences—cherish your family and your lover, they would not come back once they leave. Although with a time machine, the actor can not save his well-loved girlfriend’s life which lost in a traffic accident. The history can not be revised, even with a time machine, so the only way for us is to appreciate life and cherish our lover, family members, and our friends. Last but not least, the movie sparkle people’s imagination. The movie is fiction, but human’s imagination is true. In reality, we have not invent a time machine yet, but only imagine it first can we have the chance to make our dream come true. Just as Albert Einstein said that: Imagination is more important than knowledge. So I think it is also one of the value of this movie—sparkle people’s imagination and let us more creative. In summary, I like the movie <time machine> because it conveys some physical knowledge (which I loved), convey the emotional feelings let us cherish family and friends, and made people filled with imagination and become more creative.

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My Favorite Movie  (All "important" words in a title are capitalized in English!)

My favorite movie is the movie named "Time Machine".  The movie mainly describes a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travelling through different periods of time. I love this movie because I gained many valuable things from it, not only some basic physical ("physical" implies the body...I believe you mean the science of physics...I would reword it to say "basic knowledge in physics") knowledge but also many emotional feelings.

First, I got basic physical knowledge (see note above) from this fictional movie. Personally, I love physics very much and have always been fascinated in with such classical physics (physics always ends in an "s" as far as I know when talking about the branch of science) theories—the big bang, the universal of our cosmos, and so on. In the movie "Time Machine", I can get access to many physics theories.  It really excited me.

Secondly, the plot of this movie conveys a message to its audiences—cherish your family and your lover, they would will not come back once they leave. Although  Even with a time machine, the actor can not save his well-loved girlfriend’s life which was lost in a traffic accident. The history can not be revised, even with a time machine, so the only way for us is to appreciate life and cherish our lover, family members, and our friends.

Last but not least, the movie sparks people’s imagination. The movie is fictional, but a human’s (I would use "person's" rather than "human's")imagination is true. In reality, we have not invented a time machine yet, (this following phrase is difficult ->) but only imagine it first can we have the chance to make our dream come true. (Perhaps I would say, "but then again, dreams come true are really just someone's imagination put to action.")  Just as Albert Einstein once said that, "Imagination is more important than knowledge."  So I think it is also one of the value of this movie—sparkle people’s imagination and let us become more creative.

In summary, I like the movie  "Time Machine" because it conveys some physical knowledge (again, I would say "knowledge of physics") (which I loved), convey  and the emotional feelings that allow let us to cherish family and friends.  It also and makes people become filled with imagination and become  grow more creative.
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My favorite movie

My favorite movie is the movie named "time machine", the movie mainly describe a plot about a person who invented a time machine and can travel ling through to different periods of time. I love this movie because I gained many valuable things from it, not only some basic physical physics knowledge but also many emotional feelings. (seen note) 

Note : "but many emotional feelings" is a little awkwardly expressed. It would sound better as ... "but also a strong emotional response."

Firstly, I get basic physics (physical has a different meaning from physics) knowledge from this fictional movie. Personally, I love physics very much and always fascinated in such classical physics theories—the big bang, the universal of our cosmos, and so on. In the movie "time machine", I can get access (or "exposure") to many physics theories, and it really excited me.

Secondly, the plot of this movie conveys a message to its audiences—cherish your family and your lover, they would not come back once they leave. (better as ... Once they are gone, they will never come back) Although Even with a time machine, the actor can not save his well-loved girlfriend’s life which is lost in a traffic accident. The History can not be revised, even with a time machine, so the only way for us is to appreciate life and cherish our lover, family members, and our friends.

Last but not least, the movie sparkle fires people’s imaginations. While the movie is fiction, but human’s the inspiration from that imagination is true. In reality, we have not invented a time machine yet, but and can only imagine it first can that we have the chance to make our dreams come true. Just as Albert Einstein said that: "Imagination is more important than knowledge" , so I think it is also one of the value of this movie— sparkle to inspire people’s imaginations and let us more creative.

Note: sparkle is not ever used in this context. Better choices are "fires" "stokes" "inspires" the imagination. 

In summary, I like the movie "time machine"  because it conveys some physics al knowledge (which I loved), conveys the emotional feelings that let us cherish family and friends, and made people fills ed people with imagination and to become more creative.

Notes: When quoting, surround the quoted text with " ", and not <> for punctuation.

Cheers,
A.

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