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this is my writhing exercise. if i made a mistake, could you correct them for me ^^ please orea is beautiful country but i hope that our country does not develop anymore in nature because nature is very important for all people. i hope that i want to visit at America , Australia and Canada because first, my cousin lived America, second , i hope that i want to see a koala and kangaroo, because, these animals are very cute. finally, Canada, there is country of my friend, so, sometimes i will be over to watch my friend in Canada. 4 years ago, i was traveled around Europe with my friends for 16 days. theres are Prague Czech, Hungary, Vienna Austria, Heidelberg in Germany, and Munich.

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This is my writhing writing exercise.  If I made a some mistakes, could you correct them for me please? ^^  [Here, "them" is plural, so "a mistake" should be "some mistakes".  OR:  "If I made a mistake, could you correct it for me please?"  Either one works.  : )]

Korea is a beautiful country, but I hope that our country does not develop anymore further into nature because nature is very important for all people.  
[Choose either "I hope to..." or "I want to..." in the next sentence two sentences.  Both express the same idea.]
I hope to / I want to visit at America, Australia, and Canada. because First, my cousin lived in America, second, I hope  to / I want to see a koala and kangaroo, because these animals are very cute.  Finally, Canada, there is country of my friend lives in Canada, so sometimes I will be over go there  sometime to watch see my friend in Canada.  
4 Four years ago, I was traveled around Europe with my friends for 16 days.  theres are We went to Prague, Czech Republic; Hungary; Vienna, Austria ; and Heidelberg  and Munich in Germany and Munich.

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-Capitalize "I", all the time.  Also capitalize at the beginning of a new sentence.

Let me know if you have questions about my correction.  I hope it's helpful!
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Capitalization Rules Capitalization Rules Capitalize the first word of a sentence Capitalize the pronoun "I" Capitalize proper nouns : persons, places / things, names of people • Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. Capitalize days of the week, holidays, and months of the year. Do not capitalize seasons. Capitalize countries, languages, and nationalities (adjective form of a specific country) Capitalize titles that come before names. Do not capitalize titles that follow names. Capitalize letter salutations (openings) and closings Capitalize the first word in a quote. Capitalize content words in titles. Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry
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Capilatization / Punctuation
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Better way to say  (use more contractions "does + not" = doesn't
Plurals

This is my writhing exercise. If I made a mistake, could you correct them for me ^^ please?

Korea is beautiful country but I hope that Korea doesn't develop anymore toward nature because nature is very important for everyone.
I hope that i want to visit at America because my cousin lived in America.  I would like to visit Australia because I want to see a koala and kangaroo.  I think these animals are very cute. Finally, I'd like to visit Canada, because that is where my friend lives. So, sometimes I'd like to visit my friend in Canada.
Four years ago, I traveled around Europe with my friends for 16 days to Prague Czech, Hungary, Vienna Austria, Heidelberg in Germany, and Munich.

Study Capitalization. 
Study Plurals.
You just need more practice in word order and more common ways to say.
Good job!

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