My friend and i
I have many friends but i have just two best friend.I met them in school eight years ago. Name of them are Monireh and Maryam. When i have problem Monireh give me a good solution.sometimes i alone and sad so i call Maryam and invite her to go my house then we drink tea and talk a lot. Maryam and i went Mashhad four mounth ago . We have a good time in Mashhad .
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What a good friends Baran :)
By the way I think this one is more correct:
My friends and I
I have many friends but I have just only have two best friends.I met them in school, eight years ago.The names of them are Monireh and Maryam.When I have any problem Monireh gives me a good solution.Sometimes I feel alone and sad so I call Maryam and invite her to go come my house.Then we drink tea and talk a lot. Maryam and I went Mashhad four mounths ago.We had a good time in Mashhad .
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زیارتت قبول باران جان!
THIS SENTECE doesn't have any verb "sometimes i alone"you should say some time i FEEL alone or i AM alone!
and in this sentence "invite her to go " i think you should say invite her to COME!
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