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Tourism is Egypt It's now clear that tourism can play a very important role in our economy.From that point the government pays much attention to it.Tourism is nearly the main resource of income in Egypt. Egypt is very rich of touristic places such as the pyramids,the Sphinx ,resorts,ancient temples,landscapes in the northern coast,...etc. The most thing that attracts tourists is the weather in Egypt which is usually sunny. The view of the Nile in the middle of Cairo when the sun rises is invaluable. In the range of 10 million visitor visits Egypt every year.and most of them enjoy it a lot. The government encourages tourism by providing the tour guides,improving the services and making advertisement. The Egyptian airline which is called Egypt Air is transporting millions of passengers all over Egypt and abroad. The Egyptian people also give a hand by helping tourist and guiding them. That's all about tourism in Egypt and that's why it is adored. please correct the mistakes ^_^

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It's now clear that Tourism can plays a very important role in our the Egyptian economy.__From that point the government pays much attention to it.Tourism It is nearly the main resource of income revenue for in Egypt and the Government is paying much attention to it.


Egypt is very rich of touristic has many great places to visit such as the pyramids,_the Sphinx_,_resorts,_ancient temples,_landscapes world class resorts and natural wonders in the northern coast,_...etc.


The most thing that attracts Another great tourists attraction is the sunny weather in of Egypt which is usually sunny.


The sunrise view of the Nile in the middle of Cairo is spectacular. when the sun rises is invaluable.
In the range of Almost 10 million visitors visits Egypt every year.and almost everyone had a great time. most of them enjoy it a lot.


The government encourages tourism by providing the knowledgeable tour guides,_improving the services and making advertisement.


The Egyptian airline which is called Egypt Air is the national airline, transporting millions of passengers all over Egypt and abroad.


The Egyptian people also give a hand by helping tourist and guiding are friendly and warm.  They try to help whenever and wherever they can. I prefer to leave this out as you are implying that the Egyptian people are just pandering to money paying tourists and are not naturally warm and friendly people!  Even if this is the case, you should be so point blank. them.


That's all about tourism in Egypt and that's why it is adored.
We love tourism in Egypt.


please correct the mistakes ^_^

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sorry, i meant "Tourism in Egypt" and not "Tourism is Egypt"
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No thanks.

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