For marriage(2)

I place” intimacy” in the first (put smth in prior). And for passion, I place it second. Passion is always attached to physical attraction. But it doesn’t mean that I will just love someone (will fall in love because of his good looks, handsomeness) handsome. What I mean is more about behaving elegance (elegance not adverb). Not everyone have the chance to be born (as) a nature beauty, but everyone has the chance to enhance the makings training (traits making). I can’t bear living with a man who has beer belly. There is not a man (who) is nature born with beer belly. Who has beer belly means that he didn’t care about himself, and indulge himself drinking beer. My aunt recalled her first meet with my uncle, her husband. She said when she was young, there are many young guys chasing her, and my uncle is one of them. Some of those guys are (more) handsome than my uncle, but my uncle is the only one who behaved like a grown (up) men. His good (adult) behavior made up for the lack of his looks. My aunt can’t afford (couldn't help but falling in love) fell in love with him.

The last element of my marriage is commitment. That means willingness to maintain long term relationship. It is difficult to judge whether the man will spend the remainder of his life with you before you break up. Actually, the long relationship between couples is more about family than love. My grandpa and my grandma always have argument with each other. When I was young, I even thought that they don’t love each other. But last summer, my grandpa hurt(ed) his legs. My grandma got very nerve(ou)s. I (experienced)find the great love between them. For that reason, don’t think (a) lot about whether you will have happiness with the man you are going to marry. And I believe that the man who has the same values as me and is physical attraction(ed) to me will not break up with me without (serious) reason(s).

All in all, I can’t tell (whether) the man I want to marry is poor or rich. But after rational analysis, I think the man is unlikely to be poor. So, I am not those kind of girl who want to marry a poor man for love. (who chooses love in favor of financial benefits)

Your self esteem astonishes me :D