Beijing today

Last month it was very hot in Beijing. (This is ok, but "It was very hot in Beijing last month" sounds more natural). The news said it was the highest temperature during for 40 years. My friend, who was is from Thailand, said it was hotter than his hometown. It was really was a absolute torture to go outside in the afternoon. Someone cooked an egg on his car under the sun and it was done within 5 minutes! Fortunately, it's getting cooler now. Autumn is the best season in Beijing. I like the wind cool breeze in the evening and the sunshine the most.

There aren't any major mistakes here. All I did was make it sound a little more natural. I'm going to Beijing in 2 weeks. I hope the Spring weather will be nice.