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It's too hot!! It's too hot. I don't like being hot so I hate summer. 너무 더워요. 나는 더운게 싫어요 그래서 여름이 싫어요. It 's too hot to go outside and we easily get angry in this weather. 밖에 나가기엔 너무 덥고 이런 날씨에는 화도 쉽게 나요. Plus, my kids are on summer vacation so I have more house work. 게다가, 우리 아이들이 여름방학 중이라 집안일도 더 많아졌어요. When I cook, the heat from stove makes me more hot. 요리할때는 스토브의 열기가 나를 더 덥게해요. How can I go through well in this summer? 어떻게 이 여름을 잘 보낼 수 있을까요?

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It's too hot!!

It's too hot. I don't like being when it's hot, so I hate summer.
너무 더워요. 나는 더운게 싫어요 그래서 여름이 싫어요.
It's too hot to go outside and we easily get angry easily in this weather.
밖에 나가기엔 너무 덥고 이런 날씨에는 화도 쉽게 나요.
Plus, my kids are on summer vacation so I have more house work.
게다가, 우리 아이들이 여름방학 중이라 집안일도 더 많아졌어요.
When I cook, the heat from stove makes me (even) more hot.
요리할때는 스토브의 열기가 나를 더 덥게해요.
How can I go get (make it) through well in this summer well?
어떻게 이 여름을 잘 보낼 수 있을까요?

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Oh, I'm sorry to hear it's so hot.  >.<  It's been kind of hot here, as well.

Let me know if you have any questions.^^  You did a good job!

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It's Too Hot!!

It's too hot.  I don't like being hot so I hate summer.

It 's too hot to go outside and it seems like we get angry at eachother much more easily in this weather.

Plus, my kids are on summer vacation so I have more house work to do.

When I cook, the heat from stove makes me even more hot.

How will I survive this summer heat?




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Thanks. We must relax in summer. haha
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ME TOO !!! You'll feel cool if you calm down! In Chinese is 心静自然凉

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