First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Why am I learning English language?
First of all, I study it, because I want to travell and read some books as originally written. Also, if I can speak English, I can understand other people who speak it.

Good work! Some notes:

why do I learn = general habit or fact; why am I learning = at this moment.

"Because" naturally divides up the sentence, so no need for a comma there. You'll find that English uses far less commas than Russian.

We know English is a language, so no need to point that out. ;) Also, repetition looks too simple (and even babyish) in English, so I changed English to it for smoothness.

Why am I learning the English language?
First of all I am studying it, because I want to travel and read some books in their original English. Also, if I can speak English, I can understand people who speak English.

Понятно.

That was a great entry; asking questions in English usually means using the "do" verb, and we use it a lot in the negative... don't we?  "do" is the number two verb in English.  Teacher Brad corrected your entry's grammar, but the word "travel" does have its European spelling, which came from the word "travail" which came from the word "torture"... ain't we got fun!?.  I learn languages to read books, too!  I hope we can be friends.

My Skype:  brian.madden4

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Why do I learn the English language?
First of all, I study it because I want to travel and read some books in the original. Also, if I can speak English, I can understand people who speak English.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself