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Help me choose my new eyes! 帮我选新眼睛! Do you wear spectacles? 你有戴眼镜吗 It is very inconvenient. 因为很不方便。I haven't changed my spectacles in a long time. 我很久没传眼镜。 I need new spectacles, so I went to a have a look at a few optometrist. 我需要新的眼镜, 所以我处看看几个 Almost a dozen actually. 确实差不多一打。 I like to look around before I shop. 我喜欢看看前买。I am now down to three choices. 我到三个选者Should my spectacles’ frames be made of: 握个眼镜应该作甚么物质 Titanium (Metal that look elegant and very tough yet very light, also comes with clip on shades) 钛铁矿 ( 看典雅也很刚但是很轻, 都有可以贴的太阳眼镜) Plastic (Comfortable and light) 塑料 (舒服都轻) Polymer (a new material that is more flexible than plastic and can bend easily without breaking) 高聚物 (新的物质。 塑料比较易弯和不容易断) Thank you, your views are much appreciated. 谢谢, 你的看法

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Help me choose my new eyes! 帮我选新眼睛!

Do you wear spectacles? 你有戴眼镜吗 It is very inconvenient. 戴眼镜因为很不方便。I haven't changed my spectacles in a long time. 我很久没传换眼镜。 I need new spectacles, so I went to a have a look at a few optometrist. 我需要新的眼镜, 所以我处去看了几个 Almost a dozen actually. 确实差不多一打。 I like to look around before I shop. 我喜欢看看前买在买之前到处看看。I am now down to three choices. 我到三个选者现在决定三选一Should my spectacles’ frames be made of: 握个眼镜应该作甚么物质我的镜框用什么材质的好呢?

Titanium (Metal that look elegant and very tough yet very light, also comes with clip on shades) 钛铁矿 ( 看起来很典雅也很刚牢固但是很轻, 都而且有可以贴的太阳眼镜)

Plastic (Comfortable and light) 塑料 (舒服都而且轻)

Polymer (a new material that is more flexible than plastic and can bend easily without breaking) 高聚物 (新的物质。 塑料比较易弯和不容易断柔韧度比塑料好而且不容易断)

Thank you, your views are much appreciated. 谢谢, 你的看法



PS: i prefer the first ones,

there's a obvious mistake you had made
i think you shouldnt translate AND or ALSO to "都", you'd better say it "而且”
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Help me choose my new eyes! 帮我选新眼睛!you can't choose eyes. you should say  "help me choose new glasses"

Do you wear spectacles? 你有戴眼镜吗 It is very inconvenient. 因为那很不方便。I haven't changed my spectacles in a long time. 我很久没传换眼镜。 I need new spectacles, so I went to a have a look at a few optometrist. 我需要新的眼镜, 所以我处去看看了几一个新的验光师, Almost a dozen actually. 确实差不多一打(i don't know what do you want say in here , but  you should translate for 差不多有一打 )。 I like to look around before I shop. 我喜欢先看看前再买 or 我喜欢在买之前先到处看看。I am now down to three choices. 我现在到有三个选者择(pin yin is  “ze”)Should my spectacles’ frames be made of: 握个我的眼镜 眼镜框应该作用甚么什么物质材质的好呢?

Titanium (Metal that look elegant and very tough yet very light, also comes with clip on shades) 钛铁矿 ( 看起来典雅也很刚牢固(结实)但是还(“yet ” can translate for 但是,but should translate for  "还"  in there)很轻, 都而且有可以贴的太阳眼镜)

Plastic (Comfortable and light) 塑料 (舒服都 而且(or 且)轻)

Polymer (a new material that is more flexible than plastic and can bend easily without breaking) 高聚物 (新的物质。 塑料比较易弯和不容易断 灵活度比塑料好而且(or 且)可以弯曲不容易断)

Thank you, your views are much appreciated. 谢谢, 你的看法
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Help me choose my new eyes! 帮我选新眼睛!

Do you wear spectacles? 你有戴眼镜吗 It is very inconvenient. 因为(戴眼镜其实)很不方便。I haven't changed my spectacles in a long time. 我很久没传换眼镜了。 I need new spectacles, so I went to a have a look at a few optometrist. 我需要新的眼镜, 所以我处看看几个看了一些视力测定的医生 Almost a dozen actually. 确实差不多一打(I'm sorry I don't konw what you want to say)。 I like to look around before I shop. 我喜欢看看前买在买之前先看看。I am now down to three choices. 我到三个选者 现在有三个选择 Should my spectacles’ frames be made of: 握个我的眼镜应该作甚么物质 选择什么材料的

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