Help me choose my <strike>new eyes</strike>! 帮我选新眼睛！you can't choose eyes. you should say  "help me choose new glasses"

Do you wear spectacles? 你有戴眼镜吗 It is very inconvenient. <strike>因为</strike>那很不方便。I haven't changed my spectacles in a long time. 我很久没<strike>传</strike>换眼镜。 I need new spectacles, so I went to a have a look at a few optometrist. 我需要新的眼镜， 所以我处去<strike>看</strike>看了<strike>几</strike>一个新的验光师， Almost a dozen actually. 确实差不多一打（i don't know what do you want say in here , but  you should translate for 差不多有一打 ）。 I like to look around before I shop. 我喜欢先看看<strike>前</strike>再买 or 我喜欢在买之前先到处看看。I am now down to three choices. 我现在<strike>到</strike>有三个选<strike>者</strike>择（pin yin is  “ze”）Should my spectacles’ frames be made of: <strike>握个</strike>我的<strike>眼镜</strike> 眼镜框应该<strike>作</strike>用<strike>甚么</strike>什么<strike>物质</strike>材质的好呢？

Titanium (Metal that look elegant and very tough yet very light, also comes with clip on shades) 钛铁矿 （ 看起来典雅也很<strike>刚</strike>牢固（结实）<strike>但是</strike>还（“yet ” can translate for 但是，but should translate for  "还"  in there）很轻， <strike>都</strike>而且有可以贴的太阳眼镜）

Plastic (Comfortable and light) 塑料 （舒服<strike>都</strike> 而且（or 且）轻）

Polymer (a new material that is more flexible than plastic and can bend easily without breaking) 高聚物 （新的物质<strike>。 塑料比较易弯和不容易断 </strike>灵活度比塑料好而且（or 且）可以弯曲不容易断）

Thank you, your views are much appreciated. 谢谢， 你的看法