Near my home
Near my home using passives forms.
My home is a little building near the city centrer of Verona in Italy. A new street was built by the bricklayers. It is a large street and it is traveled by a lot cars every day. A big park will be built in September and in the same period a fountain will be installed. Finnaly a bicycle lane has been finished. I'm lucky because the zone near my home is very very beautiful because a lot of investements were and will be done from our mayor.
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Near my home
Near my home using passives forms.
My home is a little building near the city centrer of Verona in Italy. A new street was built by the bricklayers. It is a large street and it is traveled by a lot of cars every day. A big park will be built in September, and in the same period at the same time, a fountain will be installed. Finnaly Finally, a bicycle lane has been finished created. I'm lucky because the zone area near my home is very, very beautiful because since a lot of investements investments were and will be done from made by our mayor.
Great job using passive form! Just a quick note...
In your sentence about the bicycle lane, when you say "a bicycle lane has been finished," it sounds like the person listening already knows about the bicycle lane and this project has been going on for a long time. So, you should say, "THE bicycle lane has been finished." But, if they just started this project and it's new, you can say, "A bicycle lane has been created." English is a weird language!
Also, in the last sentence, when I changed the word "because" to "since" because we usually do not use the word "because" twice in one sentence. It's better not to.
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