Reflection on The True Face of China’s Plastic Surgery Clinics
I consider article an in-depth feature from the title. But it turns out an introduction of Lu Yufan’s artwork. It’s kind of misleading.
However, this article is good. I like the way it starts. The journalist described how the artwork looks like. The description can arouse the curiosity of audiences. Journalist can use this way to start a report not only for introduction but also for storytelling.
Lu’s artwork inspired me a lot. She neither advocate for the plastic surgery nor get stuck into the platitude of feminism critique—her work focus on specific people. A woman after cosmetic surgery says “Look at me. It’s all worth it”. Another woman says” I’m sorry, I made a compromise with to the society that judges people by their appearance.” These girls may be lack of confidence and courage, but they are honest with their hearts.
I also want to talk about my attitude towards plastic surgery. This is an industry, which means it aims at profits. They can’t only earn profits from unsatisfactory and unconfident. The owner of a plastic surgery hospital is the one person in the world who wants a woman to lose her confidence. It sounds vicious, but I don’t mean it. Lacking confident is human nature; we need to embrace it. It’s totally fine to do cosmetic surgery, and it’s totally fine to be unsatisfied with ourselves. Force somebody to be confident is also a kind of bullying.
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Reflection on The True Face of China’s Plastic Surgery Clinics
I consider imagined the article was an in-depth feature from the title. But it turns out it is an introduction of Lu Yufan’s artwork. It’s kind of misleading.
However, this article is good. I like the way it starts. The journalist described how what the artwork looks like1*. The description can arouse the curiosity of the audiences. Journalists can use this way to start a report not only for an introduction but also for storytelling.
Lu’s artwork inspired me a lot. She is neither an advocate for the plastic surgery nor does she get stuck into2* the platitude of feminism critique—her work focus on specific people. A woman after cosmetic surgery says “Look at me. It’s all worth it”. Another woman says” I’m sorry, I made a compromise with to the society that judges people by their appearance.” These girls may be lack of in confidence and courage, but they are honest with their hearts.
I also want to talk about my attitude towards plastic surgery. This is an industry, which means it aims at profits. They can’t only earn profits from the unsatisfactory and unconfident. The owner of a plastic surgery hospital is the one person in the world who wants a woman to lose her confidence. It sounds vicious, but I don’t mean it. Lacking confident confidence is human nature; we need to embrace it. It’s totally fine to do cosmetic surgery, and it’s totally fine to be unsatisfied with ourselves. To Force somebody to be confident is also a kind of bullying.
1* I would prefer - what the artwork is like. - looks like - is more just physical external appearance- for a person, a building, a town.
2* to get stuck into - means to begin to do something enthusiastically or seriously
Very nicely expressed.
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Wow, this is interesting! Thanks for sharing.
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