Birth (inspired in Golden Dawn - Golden Opportunity, by Patricia J Tausz)
A fear floods my heart. A weird fear. It is as if something wanted to come out from me and say something. In fact, something wants to be born. I feel the pain.
Something desires a dawn, a beginning. But, not just a dawn… it wants a remarkable one, with an impressive pink sky.
I cannot see what it is. I feel, with affliction, that something wants to have a body. Something wants to penetrate the factual reality.
What is it?
What is it? This uncertainty disturbs my soul.
What is it?
Wait a minute.
Wow! My first guess: it is the unknown.
What is…?
What…?
W…?
W…
Wo…
Wor..
Word. Eureka! It is. A word.
A word eventually shows up. It wants to feast. I also want it, because my uncertainty away rolled and my fear and anguish wore off. Such a soothing feeling!
But, hold on. Hold on! My soothing quickly falls through. The certainty bites the dust.
Word.
Wor…
Wo…
W…?
Word?
Which word?
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Birth (inspired in Golden Dawn - Golden Opportunity, by Patricia J Tausz)
A fear floods my heart. A weird fear. It is as if something wanted to come out from me and say something. In fact, something wants to be born. I feel the pain.
Something desires a dawn, a beginning. But, not just a dawn… it wants a remarkable one, with an impressive pink sky.
I cannot see what it is. I feel, with affliction, that something wants to have a body. Something wants to penetrate the factual reality.
What is it?
What is it? This uncertainty disturbs my soul.
What is it?
Wait a minute.
Wow! My first guess: it is the unknown.
What is…?
What…?
W…?
W…
Wo…
Wor..
Word. Eureka! It is. A word.
A word eventually shows up. It wants to feast. I also want it, because my uncertainty away rolled rolled away and my fear and anguish wore off. Such a soothing feeling!
But, hold on. Hold on! My soothing quickly falls through. The certainty bites the dust.
Word.
Wor…
Wo…
W…?
Word?
Which word?
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