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    Example d'un message de remerciement après un entretien (formal) Bonjour Madame Stark et Monsieur Lannister, Suite à notre rencontre hier matin, je voulais encore une fois vous remercier pour votre temps et pour votre présentation du Winterfell et le poste de garde de porte. Je tiens à vous dire que je suis toujours intéressé dans cette opportunité car j'ai eu un très bonne impression de vous et de l'organisation. Je reste à votre disposition pour toutes informations complémentaires concernant ma candidature. Meilleures salutations
    November 10, 2019
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    L'Autocorrect: Le filet de securité qui attaque mon apprentisage J'adore l'Autocorrect. Apprendre une langue est déjà assez difficil, surtout avec les nouvelles characteres qui existe même pas dans ma lange maternelle (heuresment je suis pas en train d'apprende le Japonais...). Je l'invite toujours, sans hesitation, de m'aider avec mon écriture francais qui je comprend bien est un de mes plus grandes pointes faible. Tu n'est pas sûr ou les accents se trouve dans le mot "télévision"? Ce n'est pas grave, l'Autocorrect est là pour toi. Est-ce que tu as déjà ecrit des milliards d'émails, mais toujours tu hésites que tu as bien épelé "meilleurs salutations"? Te t'inquiete pas, pas besion d'un effort des gens sympa sur iTalki, il y a un algorithm que va regéler tout ça. Mais (bien sûr il y a un "mais") ce util utile est en train de tuer mon écriture, même avant il avait l'opportunité de grandir. Donc je pense que c'est bien l'heure que je met a côte mon filet de securité, au moins pour un petit moment, car je suis enfin prêt de mettre l'effort ce qu'il faut d'aller un pas plus proche à la prochaine niveau de cette belle langue. Sinon... ben... je vais toujours écrire comme ça :)
    November 8, 2019
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    Live your life as if only your actions could teach

    As the saying <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">says</s> goes, we preach more by our actions than by our words
    <em>As the saying goes, we preach more by our actions than by our words.</em>

    Let us be even more extreme in this regard. Let us not ever speak a single word to tell somebody off.
    <em>Let us be even more extreme in this regard. Let us not ever speak a single word to tell somebody off.</em>

    It seems impossible, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">isn’t</s> doesn't it? It may seem to be <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> self-repressing.
    <em>It seems impossible, doesn't it? It may seem to be self-repressing.</em>

    Indeed, sometimes we may have to speak our minds, but it needs to be done in a appropriate situation or circumstance.

    For example, to protect an innocent person from a bully, or <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">an</s> from unfair treatment.
    <em>For example, to protect an innocent person from a bully, or from unfair treatment.</em>

    It is not actually preaching here, it’s an act.

    At times, speaking isn’t preaching because you’re fully absorbed in the action, you put yourself at risk and you’re using these words as a shield or <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> Katana, not as a stepping stone to your own self-esteem or self-delusion.
    <em>At times, speaking isn’t preaching because you’re fully absorbed in the action, you put yourself at risk and you’re using these words as a shield or Katana, not as a stepping stone to your own self-esteem or self-delusion.</em>


    This is why<s style="color: rgb(153, 51, 255);">,</s> it is important to weigh <s style="color: rgb(153, 51, 255);">at any time</s> our words and wonder<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</s> if we use them as a person of action, as a hypocrite, or as an inconsistent person.
    <em>This is why it is important to weigh our words and wonder if we use them as a person of action, as a hypocrite, or as an inconsistent person.</em>

    This explains why people of action may cherish silence which enables them to think more clearly.

    Moreover, they may not think of their words as an intangible matter, whereas <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">as</s> a double-edged sword <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">which</s> might require<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> carefulness and dexterity while being used.
    <em>Moreover, they may not think of their words as an intangible matter, whereas a double-edged sword might require carefulness and dexterity while being used.</em>

    To continue this analogy, think of yourself as a swordsman, a knight, a samurai, a writer with <s style="color: rgb(153, 51, 255);">his or her</s> your quill, or any other master you could picture.
    <em>To continue this analogy, think of yourself as a swordsman, a knight, a samurai, a writer with your quill, or any other master you could picture.</em>

    See how they use <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">they</s> their favorite tool in public, with parsimony, even if they may train over and over again in the shadows (mentally, physically and even spiritually).
    <em>See how they use their favorite tool in public, with parsimony, even if they may train over and over again in the shadows (mentally, physically and even spiritually).</em>

    Think the same of your mouth and it will become a formidable weapon and safeguard.


    <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">red text</s> = correction (removal)
    yellow text = correction (addition)
    <s style="color: rgb(153, 51, 255);">purple text</s> = optional removal (not required, but more natural)
    blue text = optional suggestion (not required, but more natural)
    <em>italics</em> = updated sentence

    I hope this is helpful!
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    November 8, 2019
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    A university education is necessary for success in today's world. (Agree or disagree question)

    Many people believe that<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s> one of the key factors leading to success in modern world is education. It has been considered that a well-educated person knows how to tackle <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">with</s> problems more efficiently <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">rather than someone else</s> than someone without a university education. Personally, I believe there are several reason why <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that</s> having a university degree can be an essential prerequisite in order to achieve something significant in life <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">for several reasons</s>.
    The first reason is that usually people who study at <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> university obtain sufficient skills and knowledge that <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</s> are highly <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">required</s> sought after for their future career path.
    For instance, most companies and organizations have certain mandatory expectations about the perfect candidate they are looking for. Having a degree in particular specialization is one of the most common requirements. Even if <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">person have</s> someone has enough knowledge and skills for a desirable job position, but are unable to demonstrate certificate from the university or college, that might be a compelling reason for HR to refuse. Undoubtedly, there are many other ways to convince employers to hire a particular person, especially in the IT sphere, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">but</s> though generally<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s> high-skilled job positions imply that a would-be employee has <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">an</s> some evidence of competency in the form of academic degree.
    The other <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">good</s> compelling reason to get a university education is related to a special environment or atmosphere that a university can provides for students. For example, when I was studying environmental management at <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> university in Moscow, I met a lot of intelligent and interesting people. While some of them contributed to my growth as a specialist at that time, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> others gave me their valuable recommendations, that I used in order to get my first job offer from one of the top consulting firms dealing with environmental issues. Thus, university is the best place when it comes to networking and finding a mentor.
    All things considered, I can state that a university education provides knowledge, skills and networks which are extremely important for those <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">people</s> who are willing to become successful in modern society.
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    November 7, 2019
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    How will I learn this <s>Leanguage</s> language?

    Hi everyone. Today, I asked myself: How will learn English? I've been learning English since school, but our education is not <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a good</s> very good. We <s>stady</s> study another type of English here. Our English is not alive. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Rules, grammatice and grammar from 50-th from 50 years ago</s> We have grammar rules that are 50 years old. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">We don't have interactive</s> It's not interactive, for example, compared to modern video courses from the UK or USA. At school, I have been learning irregular verbs for three years. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">. But know situation ecxhange</s> However, I know things are changing. The Internet, YouTube, italki and many other interesting sources are helping me. Though the main helper is me. Motivation is a strong thing. Every day we must learn foreign languages: a new rule, a new word, a new text, a new <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">speach</s> speech. It's like going to the gym. Only regular exercises can help you remove the beer belly ;) I'm lucky <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">beacause</s> because <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I know some of the hardest languages since childhood</s> I have grown up with some of the hardest languages to learn, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">It's russian and ukrainian leanguage</s> Russian and Ukranian. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">They leanguages</s> These languages are very similar, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">They both don't have</s> neither one has a logic. I can just write a verb in front of a noun ;) <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Who learn russian good luck)</s> Whoever is learning Russian, good luck. Now I have set a goal to learn English in 6 months. I hope italki can help me understand this beautiful language.
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    November 7, 2019
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    Birth (inspired in Golden Dawn - Golden Opportunity, by Patricia J Tausz)

    A fear floods my heart. A weird fear. It is as if something wanted to come out from me and say something. In fact, something wants to be born. I feel the pain.

    Something desires a dawn, a beginning. But, not just a dawn… it wants a remarkable one, with an impressive pink sky.

    I cannot see what it is. I feel, with affliction, that something wants to have a body. Something wants to penetrate the factual reality.

    What is it?

    What is it? This uncertainty disturbs my soul.

    What is it?

    Wait a minute.

    Wow! My first guess: it is the unknown.

    What is…?

    What…?

    W…?

    W…

    Wo…

    Wor..

    Word. Eureka! It is. A word.

    A word eventually shows up. It wants to feast. I also want it, because my uncertainty <s>away rolled</s> rolled away and my fear and anguish wore off. Such a soothing feeling!

    But, hold on. Hold on! My soothing quickly falls through. The certainty bites the dust.

    Word.

    Wor…

    Wo…

    W…?

    Word?

    Which word?
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    November 7, 2019
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