No 57 Run in the rain
Although the weather forecast said there was a typhoon, I still went outside and ran. At first, it rained slightly. I kept running. When I ran to 4km, it rained heavily. My aim was 6km. So I decided to go on.
Running in the rain was a totally different feeling, the rain hit on my face, the wind was getting stronger and stronger. It was so cool. Soon I was wet through. But I felt comfortable.
When I ran to 6km, I stood in the rain, I looked at the sky, the cloud flew fast. I remembered that my son and I jumped in the heavy rain five years ago. He was so happy, I took some pictures for him.
Different weather gives us a different feeling, that's why I like nature. Whether it is sunny or not, I will keep on running.
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No 57 - A Refreshing Run in the Rain
Although the weather forecast said there was a typhoon happening, I still went outside to run. At first, it was only raining slightly, so I kept on running. When I reached the 4 km mark though, it began to rain quite heavily. Since my goal when I had initially run out the door of my house was 6 km, I decided to continue. Running in the rain was a very different experience, as the rain pelted my face, and the wind kept getting stronger and stronger. Strangely, it was so good in so many ways! Soon, I was soaking wet although I still felt comfortable. When I finally reached the 6 km mark, I simply stood there in the rain, and as I looked up into the sky, the clouds were flying by so quickly. I suddenly remembered that my son and I had jumped around in the heavy rain five years ago. He was so happy then, and I even took some pictures of him as he played in the water. Different weather often leaves us with different feeling, which is why I like nature. Regardless of it being sunny or not, I will always keep on running.
Hi. Angela. Good job! As usual, “Whatever changes I made were to …”
Yes, staying active is not only good for your body's health, but also good for your mind. There is nothing better than a nice, refreshing run! Well, maybe other than having a cold beer afterwards… (*-^)
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Alternative to Yama with more suggestions:
No 57 Run in the rain
Although the weather forecast said there was going to be a typhoon, I still went outside and ran. At first, it rained was raining slightly lightly. I kept running. When I ran had run/gone to 4km, it rained started to rain heavily. My aim was 6km. So I decided to go on.
Running in the rain was a totally different feeling*, the rain hit fell on my face, the wind was getting stronger and stronger. It was so cool. Soon I was wet through. But I felt comfortable.
When I ran had run/gone to 6km, I stood in the rain, I looked at the sky, the clouds flew by fast. I remembered that my son and I jumped in the heavy rain five years ago. He was so happy, I took some pictures of it for him.
Different weather gives us a different feeling*, that's why I like nature. Whether it is sunny or not, I will keep on running.
*I would prefer - made me feel different / makes us feel different
Lots of natural sounding expressions used very well- to go on, soon I was wet through, whether ... or not, etc
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No 57 Run in the rain
Although the weather forecast said there was a typhoon, I still went outside and ran. At first, it rained slightly. I kept running. When I ran to 4km, it rained heavily. My aim was 6km. So I decided to go on.
Running in the rain was a totally different feeling, the rain hit on my face, the wind was getting stronger and stronger. It was so cool. Soon I was wet through. But I felt comfortable.
When I ran to 6km, I stood in the rain, I looked at the sky, the cloud flew fast. I remembered that my son and I jumped in the heavy rain five years ago. He was so happy, I took some pictures for him.
Different weather gives us a different feeling, that's why I like nature. Whether it is sunny or not, I will keep on running.
ran to: I would use: When I had run 4 km ....
hit on: delete "on". Or change the verb. The rain splashed on my face ... OR The rain splashed my face. Splashed works with or without "on".
a different feeling. You have different weather (more than one type of weather), so you have more than one feeling. delete "a" and add "s"
Different weather gives different feelings.
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