correction method
When I correct some Japanese composition, there is the case which I have only bad mark, and is not made to know why the correction method is bad. I feel that it is deprive of time and energy, and such communication is sterile. I think if dissatisfied with a correction method from another person that I want you to come to be able to use Japanese more early.
私がいくつか日本語学習の添削をしていると、badマークだけを頂いてなぜその添削方法がbadなのか知らされないケースがあります。こういったコミュニケーションは時間や体力の無駄で不毛なので、他人からの添削方法に不満があるのであれば、早く日本語ができるようになってほしいなと思います。
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correction method
When I correct some Japanese composition(compositionsでも通じると思いますが、italkiのノートなら "entries" または "sentences" の方がわかりやすいかもしれないね ) there is the case which (there are cases where) I have only bad mark( "I only receive a dislike on my correction") , and is not made to know ("I am not told/ I am not informed as to") why the correction method is bad( "the way in which I corrected is bad" / "why my corrections are bad"). I feel that it (such communication) is deprive( "a waste") of time and energy, and such communication is sterile( "pointless"). I think If you are dissatisfied with a correction method from another person( "the way in which another person has corrected your sentences" / "how another person has corrected your sentences") that I want you to ("I would like it if you could" ) if come to be able to use Japanese more early("soon"のほうが自然ですね👍)
私がいくつか日本語学習の添削をしていると、badマークだけを頂いてなぜその添削方法がbadなのか知らされないケースがあります。こういったコミュニケーションは時間や体力の無駄で不毛なので、他人からの添削方法に不満があるのであれば、早く日本語ができるようになってほしいなと思います。
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correction method
When I correct some Japanese composition('a Japanese composition' or 'some Japanese compositions), there is the case which I have only bad mark, and is not made to know why the correction method is bad(Recommend breaking up this sentence. Not sure what you mean here). I feel that it is deprive(deprived) of time and energy, and such communication is sterile(I don't think this is the correct word choice. I don't know what you mean here). I think if dissatisfied with a correction method from another person that I want you to come to be able to use Japanese more early.(Not sure what you mean here.)
私がいくつか日本語学習の添削をしていると、badマークだけを頂いてなぜその添削方法がbadなのか知らされないケースがあります。こういったコミュニケーションは時間や体力の無駄で不毛なので、他人からの添削方法に不満があるのであれば、早く日本語ができるようになってほしいなと思います。
I have some idea of what you mean to say overall but because it is unclear I cannot correct the grammar. I recommend breaking your sentences into short simple sentences. Short simple sentences do not mean that you are a beginner. Skilled native writers favor simple sentences.
-Jeff
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