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- Je n'ai pas écrit en français si longtemps Bonsoir à tous! C'est la nuit ici maintenant. Cet année, j'étudie l'éducation parce que je veux être un prof de japonais et d'anglais. Alors, il y a beaucoup des personnes qui peuvent parler d'autres langues dans mes classes. Il y a des personnes qui peuvent parler l'allemand, qui peuvent parler le français, qui peuvent parler le chinois, qui peuvent parler le japonais et il y a une personne qui peut parler le grec. Mon prof peut parler le japonais et l'espagnol. Elle m'enseigne très bien parce que nous deux pouvons parler le japonais ensemble. Moi, je peux parler l'anglais (bien sûr), le japonais, un peu de français et je viens de commencer l'apprendre du coréen. Si vous avez des conseils qui m'aideront à parfaire mon français, dites-moi s'il vous plaît! C'est tous pour aujourd'hui! À bientôt mes amis.May 16, 201310
Today
I have a cold and a bad cough. Yesterday, when I came back home(1) from my job work(2), I took some(3) medication and I(4)went to bed. Today it isn't any(5) better, but I have to be at go to(6) work. Today I should go to a doctor. I hope that your day is better than mine.I wish you this.(7)
1. In English, you say "come/go home", not "came back". You can onyl say "came back" if you add the time you came back, for example "when I came back that night". But, to say "I came back", it can also only really be used if there is someone waiting at home and you told them you'd be back later.
2. We say work, isn't of "my job".
3. If you add "some" in here, it sounds more natural, because you didn't take a whole bottle of medicine, only a bit of it.
4. You have already said "I" earlier in this sentence, so there is not need to repeat it.
5. You need to add "it" in here to show that you're talking about your cough/cold. Without the "it", it looks like you are talking about the weather or what you have t do today. Also, if you add "any" in, it sounds more natural and show that it is exactly the same as it was yesterday. If you just say "it isn't better", that could mean that it is a bit better, but not completely better.
6. Again, you can only "be at work" if you say when you have to be there, for example "be at work today". If you don't want to say that, then you can say "go to work".
7. This sentence doesn't make much much sense. You could instead say "I hope it is." because you are talking about the reader's days.
I hope you get better soon.
0 votedApril 12, 20130- Forsake is a word that isn't used very often. It means to abandon someone, often by betraying them and hurting their feelings. It is only used in older English texts. Leave means to move away/go away from someone. This word is used a lot and it can have both good and bad connotations.0 votedApril 6, 20130
- They are both grammatically correct. However, "Am I not..." is much more formal and can sound a bit funny. We say "Aren't I...", which looks grammatically incorrect but isn't. It used to be (and still is in some places) "Amn't I...", but due the the difficulty in pronunciation, "Aren't I..." became the commonly used for form.0 votedOctober 10, 20120
