First Impression_final

People’s appearances and reactions determine our judgment of their personality and the way we react to them. Most people build their opinions upon their first impressions which often turn out to be inaccurate. It is situations, not people’s appearances, which show the person’s reality. So, I think we should review the way in which we judge people.

Two years ago, I was admitted to a hospital to have a surgery. On my arrival to the hospital, I was directed to room number 17 on the second floor. It was an all-in-white room with two beds and a bathroom. No sooner had I rested on my bed then an old woman came out of the bathroom. She was in her late sixties with a pale face, curved back, sad eyes, and white hair. No one was there in her company; she was alone. <She always came and sat beside my bed and told me about trivial things that made me fall asleep.> (run on sentence) Her speech revolved mainly around her bad son and his ungratefulness to her. At first I thought she was such a snoop(what's snoop?) woman who never let anything to ask me about. The next day I had a surgery and the doctor told my father that I was in bad need of a blood transfer. When she knew about that matter, she agreed at once to donate her blood to me. After the surgery, I apologized to her and thanked her a lot.

People’s appearances don't always tell the truth about their personality, so we should judge people through situations. How many times do we judge people through our first impression and later on we find out how wrong we are?

Good job! I could understand everything that you were talking about in your story.   :)

Hello! :) You basically said it right except for a few grammer issues. 

"I am from Thailand, when I was young I was never interested in English before and today.
I will changed my mind to try learning English for my career and future. Although it is very difficult."

2. You could also say I'm (which is I and am put together(you don't (do not) have to but you can, but most people do))

2. want is used when you want something (like: I want to learn English. or I want lunch.) when is past tense

3. ALWAYS CAPITALIZE I (never leave it as i)

4. Comma (,) between two independent clauses (sentences with a subject (i) and a verb (am and was never))