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Hi everybody!! My name Is Gabriel and I´m from Argentina. I´m an English Student here in this country and I´m looking for knowing people from all over the world such as teachers, students or whoever who can help me to improve my English Skills. I can help you with Spanish in return. I think, it would be fantastic can speak through skype in order to train our spoken skill.
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    Día cinco de mi diario en español - un programa de TV.


    Esta noche vi un programa sobre la salud y el ayuno. El consejo fue a comer normalmente durante cinco días a la semana y ayunar durante dos días. En los dos días de ayuno se puede comer 400-600 calorías o menos. Esta dieta reduce las posibilidades de enfermedades del corazón del cáncer y la demencia. Era muy interesante.
    Voy a verlo otra vez en el iPlayer.

     

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    your writting is gramatically correct and the vocabulary is well used.

    the only mistake is .......  El consejo fue a comer normalmente.

    In English people say/write: the piece of advice was to eat (as usual) / normally.

    and when someone translate it from English into Spanish, " to " has no meaning in such context.

    In spanish, according to your writing "to" means "para".

    For example:

    I did a good job to get a good mark = Hice un buen trabajo para obtener una buena nota.

    The correct sentence in your writing should be " El consejo fue comer normalmente".

    I hope you can understand my correction. Regards

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    August 8, 2012
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    Si es totalmente correcto
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    August 8, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi everyone!. First of all let me introduce myself. My name is Gabriel and I´m Argentinian. I´m learning English, because I think it´s very important learn this great language and because it´s very important for my studies and to stay in touch with people from all over the world. I dream can visit England one day and study and work there. Currently I´m studing Engineering and English. My native language is Spanish, and I was born and grew up in Argentina. I enjoy reading, swimming, and waking among other things. Regards.
    August 3, 2012
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