does it right ??

while you are shoppings in the grocery store , try to avoid any aisle you don't really need .

does this sentence sounds right academically ??

does this sentence sounds right academically ??

 

 

 

Take the amount of money that you exactly need , no more .

i want to ask about my punctuation befor couple of days , while i was watching T.V ,I saw something that shocked me.

where is the mistake in this sentence ;- Mary told us that she will like to hear from you if you have the time to wri

my paragraph My parents played an important role in my educational development .They helped me in many ways ,They raised my older brother an sister to becone agood example to me and they bought to me everything that i need it in my education ,amd the impotant thing they let me got into lots of experience that helped me in my life .In addition, they were very careful about my degree in school . I am very thankful for them . that is my paragraph and i wish if there are any mistakes please correct

can anyobe tell me what's mean of swagger jagger ,please