What a bad day today

What a bad day today, now It is raining heavily outside. I left my umbrella in at home .The weather in Shanghai is muchvery(much and very are similar words, but you generally use "much" or "many" to describe nouns, and use "very" to intensify adjectives) wet. I hate this kind of weather although I was born in Shanghai.

True Friendship Lasts Forever

Hello guys:
I am a high school student in Hangzhou, China. Hangzhou is a magnificent city and we call it the paradise on earth.Hope you will come here for traveling. I crave for speaking English as my mother language, consequencelyconsequently I have been trying hard to learn.Also I want toI would also like to cultivate friendship with people from all over the world.

Other than those few minor mistakes your spelling and grammar are very good, good job.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好，我叫Evan。我很喜歡學習中文但是我的中文很不好（我只學了～３００字），所以我的語法和生詞太不好了。我學校畢業以後想去台灣。我女朋友是台灣人，他中文說得很好。我也很喜歡聽中文音樂，我很喜歡Jay Chou,力宏王。我想合會說中文的朋友，練習寫和說中文。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好，我叫Evan。我很喜歡學習中文但是我的中文很不好（我學了～３００字），所以我的語法和生詞太不好了。我學校以後想去台灣。我女朋友是台灣人，她說話中文說話得很好。我很喜歡聽中文音樂，我很喜歡Jay Chou,王力宏。我想見中文，練習寫和說話中文。