unemployment

At the moment in the south of Europe, a lot of people are unemploymented and trying to find a work, but a lot of French companies leaves have left the old continent to go to China, or to go (near the south Europ, East Europ. ) further south or to Eastern Europe.
With these start leaving, alot of workers are without an employer, and (are going to grow the number of worker. ) the number of unemployed workers is going to grow.
Maybe it is necessary to share out the work during for one or two years. It is of company or If the employee works sixty five hours by a week, it is possible to modify these their contract and to give this one job for one or to two new workers.

Since most of your story is about doing the activity with your friends, I would suggest that you not start the paragraph with “You start walking alone... “ It suggests that what is to follow will be about a solo journey.

I changed a lot of your commas to periods.  It makes it much easier to read if you write shorter sentences.  With commas, I am trying to link everything together and I can’t stop to breathe. Periods give those breathing spaces. I had a teacher who said to read what you wrote aloud- if you had to pause to take a breath in the middle of your sentence, your sentence was probably too long (I got corrected on this alot because I like longer sentences. – Really that last sentence I wrote should be split after “aloud” and I should start a new one with “If”)

It sounds like a wonderful trip!   

A little discussion<s>s</s> starts on the beauty of the landscape <s>beauty</s>, but we are still far from the refuge, and it is time to <s>put</s> return the camera <s>in</s> to the backpack <s>to put back </s>,(you could also say here: to put back the camera in the backpack, but the repetition of back is not pleasing to the ear... this is personal preference though – both would be correct)You drop <s>bend the</s> your head and <s>leave</s> start again, moving towards the next stop ....

After <s>some time</s> awhile you stop <s>to</s> walking<s>,</s> to reform<s>er</s> the group<s>, </s>.Waiting for all of the walkers, you take your water bottle and take a drink to refresh<s>ed</s> you.Everyone comes, puts her bag down and does the same thing: drinks and eats dried fruits in anticipation of hours of walking ahead.Someone takes the camera out of her backpack to <s>freeze</s> capture the group portrait<s> landscape</s> (here- are they taking a picture of people (portrait) or of the mountains (landscape)? I assumed people since you had added the word ‘group’).

You start <s>to</s> walking <s>alone or</s> with your friends,

 you <s>start the ways to</s> look for shelter <s>of</s> from the sun under the trees, and everyone is excited, discussing the exploit together. (this phrase I changed quite a bit. I hope that I retained your meaning. I was unsure of your use of the word discussions twice...)  <s>the discussions on the everyone exploit discussions going well</s>, You go up without being too tired, and after another turn the forest disappears, the way disappears, giving <s>the</s> way <s>for</s> to a <s>one</s> stony byway.<s>,</s>The slope increases<s>,</s> and the discussions are finished.Faces begin to drop<s>, the</s> and sweat begins to bead on <s>the fronts</s> everyone’s forehead.<s>, </s> Between each walker the space increases and <s>,</s> the hierarchy is established.<s>E</s><s>ach</s> <s>takes </s> You establish your (I changed pronouns here to match what you had written elsewhere)<s>his</s> walking pace, you lift your head <s>from time to time</s> occasionally to see <s>how</s> the path ahead in the mountains, and from time to time you look behind you. <s>and</s> You begin to see <s>the</s> beautiful scenery. 

finally El-FIRT feast...........................................................

After fasting for 27 days, there are only 3 days remaining  on until the feast. After this, there is no more fasting, but really I enjoyed this month. Even though I suffered a lot from thirst and hungery, but now I have recharged my heart with faith to go on. I was completely disappointed from for with everything around me: the politics, my family, even finding a job. 

(see below)But after the feast, I will remember when all of my family having the dinner all it a rare thing in usual days to have all of them and going praying in masjd and listening to the holy Qur'an

I rephrased this slightly. I hope I retained your meaning.

But after the feast, I will remember that all of my family having dinner together is a rare thing on usual days, and praying in masjd and listening to the holy Qur'an.

Enjoy your feast! 

A RIDE TO A GLACIER

A mountain holiday can make you forget all of the hassles of work.
The mountains holidays has this feature to make forget all hassles of this work
You get up at 7 AM, you take a hearty breakfast, and afterwards your prepare your backpack with the spare extra clothes: T-shirt, Long pants, Polar Jacket? We call a 'veste polaire' a fleece jacket (I’m not sur of this definition: veste polaire en Français), a socks, a toothpaste tube and your tooth brush, a little soap, and a little towel.
You must do use a headlamp (I’m not sure of this word).
You must also take a specific type of shoes called “Cokes” on which you must put of spickes for when you will start to climb the ice in your backpack.
You take an Ice ax in your backpack that helps you when you get on the ice,
You don’t forget your camera to fix so you can make the landscapes unforgettable as you go through progress, the specifics animals, the meeting one day that you photograph in full effort ( En Français: Les rencontres d’un jour que tu photographieras en plein effort)  You make full effort to photograph the meetings of the day - I am unsure of your exact meaning.
You must also have too the foods to eating during the climb toward your goal. I often take the cereals, dried fruits and fresh bacon that I eat when I got at get to my destination before starting the climb back down.
It is very important don’t to not have a heavy backpack, if you don’t want to suffer during the climb to the refuge.
You must have too the foods to eating during the climb toward your goal, I often take the cereals, dried fruits and fresh bacon that I eat when I got at my destination before starting the climb-down.
It is very important don’t have a heavy backpack, if you don’t want suffer during the climb to the refuge.  (repeated)
You take your walking choses shoes, you take your sticks if you need help for the next climb-down and here you are left ready for two days of adventure…..

Sounds like a great time! C'est resemble un grand moment.