Letter
Dear Sir
I contacted you to express my deep disappointment in relation to a recent article posted in your newspaper called "The Bike's Dictatorship".
First of all, as we all know, traffic jams are becoming a real problem in my local city but, instead of blaming cyclists, you should acknowledge that due to the last ciclo(cycle?) paths built in the city, more than 40.000 people have replaced their cars with bikes. As a result of that, the city's air is less polluted and there are more parking spaces in the city.
Some of the arguments in your post are valid, such as your contention that sometimes many bike users cause some nuisances to pedestrians. I also concur that they frequently break the law by ignoring traffic lights, but actually, not all cyclists behave like that, and law enforcement is improving in recent years.
According to your post, bikers should pay for specific insurance to assume eventual expenses in case someone is injured. As far as I am concerned, the vast majority of home insurances cover these types of accidents. Therefore, it seems to me that, if lawmakers decide to make additional insurance necessary, it is going to fail as it has in many countries such as Switzerland and Germany.
Finally, from my own experience, the more a city invests in cyclo(cycle?) paths, the more health and welfare improve. According to many experts, daily moderate exercise can reduce the risk of heart attacks and decrease the rate of obesity. In addition, the fact that better air quality decreases the need for expenditures for allergy treatments, we should invest more in ciclo(cycle?) paths rather than highways. (<font style="background-color: yellow;">I am sorry that I made some major changes but in some instances I felt they improved the writing. In general, your writing was well developed and you presented your case in a logical manner. Very good! Most of the time it is better to break long sentences into two to help the reader comprehend without re-reading. Also, be careful of ambiguity. Sometimes it is not clear what "it" or other pronouns refer to. It is always good to set your writing aside for a little while before sending it. Errors sometime become apparent after reading again. Best regards in your future writing. I feel that writing really helps one add vocabulary and learn grammar at a deeper level.)</font>
Best regards,