Hi Joy. I couldn't correct your letter here, so I had to "tweak" it.
Dear Local City Councilor,
Hello. My name is, Joy, and I live in your council area.
I am writing you this letter to inform you of some concerns in my neighborhood regarding property damage. I always park my car in front of my house, and find on occasions that my car has had some damage done to it. For example, my back mirror and tires have been damaged on different occasions. I believe that these unfortunate incidents must be taking place during the night time.
I was finally successful in catching the teenagers who had been doing this terrible act. I believe that the police need to be more vigilant around the city during the night time, so that such events can be prevented in the future.
Sincerely,
Joy