Are these Farsi sentences correct ?

من مى آيم و سبد را مى آورم ( perfect )
I come and bring the basket (man mi awyam miayam va sabad ra mi awvaram miavaram)
من غمگين مى شوم و ماشين را مى شويم (perfect )
I become sad and wash the car (man ghemgin ghamgin mishavam or va mashin ra mishoyam)

In informal way : من می ام و سبد را می ارم

                       من غمگین میشم و ماشین را میشورم 

In formal way : You's sentences are perfect.

It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho 
This is from the book "Fathers, Sons and Grandsons" . This book is in farsi and I haven’t read it's English version yet. I know there will be both changes and lots of mistakes,but i think i need to practise my English: 

In the desert, few fruits grew. God commanded one of his Prophets to tell people that:" every person may eat one fruit a day."  

This rule law continued for generations and caused protected environment. The seeds fell down into the desert and new trees grew. After awhile turning it in to into a fertile region. This caused jealousy in the suburbs. People remained loyal to the law and they ate only one fruit a day but because they didnt share the fruits with inhabitants in other towns and villages, all of the fruits went to waste.

God sent another prophet and commanded him to send his word: "Let people eat whatever fruit they want and share them with their neighbors." 
The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoned him because this belief by then was became an unchaneable mores deep in their body and soul. Little by little the young, began to call the custom into question: "Where did this primitive custom come from?" ,although they were prohibited to do so.They decided not to follow their custom , so that they could eat whatever they want and gave the rest to other indigents . Those who remained loyal to the ingrained custom are known as faithful followers.
Indeed ,they didn’t want to know the world has changed and that they need to conform with it.

 

 

 

 

 

It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho 
This is from the book of (You have used the preposition"from",so you dont need to use the preposition "of")"Fathers, Sons and Grandsons" .As This book is in farsi and I returned it from Farsi version and I haven’t read theit's English version of this book yet. I know there is will be both changes and besides lots of mistakes in it ("in it" is additional, because it is quite clear that you are talking about mistakes and changes in the book)but i think i need just wanted to practise (practice is noun)my English: 

In the desert, there were few fruits grew (you have to use appropriate verb for the subject ). (there were no fruits anymore?) God called back commanded one of his Prophets to tell people that and said: "everybody can every person may (can shows ability and may shows possiblity)eat one fruit each a day."  

This rule law (rule is an instruction, for example rules of Football)continued for generations and caused protected environment. The seeds fell down into the earth, desert and new trees grew. After awhile turning it in to into the a fertile region. It This caused suberbs jealousy (direct object) in the suburbs. But people still have been eating only one fruit a day and they have been staunch (staunch here is verb not adjective)to the to the rule sent by their prophet but beside they didn’t let another towns and villages inhabitants use the fruits, this only caused all the fruits fell dawn and spoiled. People remained loyal to the law and they ate only one fruit a day but because they didnt share the fruits with inhabitants in other towns and villages, all of the fruits went to waste.

God sent another prophet and told  commanded him to send his word: "Let people eat fruit whatever fruit they want and share them with your their neighborhoods." 
The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoned him due to because this belief by then was became an unchaneable mores and rooted deeply into deep in their body and soul. and it couldn`t be changed easily. Little by little the young (The + adjective ), people were asking themselves began to call the custom into question: "Where the hell is did this primitive custom come from?" ,although they were prohibited to do soBut they couldn’t questioning ancient customs anymore. So They decided not to leave follow their religion custom ,then so that they could eat what ever whatever they want and could give gave the rest of them to other indigents. The only people who called themselves as religionist they have been faithful with the old customs. Those who remained loyal to the ingrained custom are known as faithful followers.
Indeed ,they didn’t want to know the world has changed and that they need to should be change with the change. conform with it.

 

 

hi, in these four sentences, u have to replace a with one, because in the sentences quantity of action is taken into account. if u say a courageous action, the words sufficient and enough will be inappropriate in the sentences. - To obtain / gain freedom, one courageous action is enough /sufficient. - To gain /obtain freedom, a courageous action is required. (for example).

Hi Steve.In ancient iran there were there kinds of activities which was very important, horse riding, swimming and archery. Here this sentence is going to manifest importance of dancing by comparing it with horse riding.

In ancient Iran dancing was as important as horse riding and Iranians used to know dancing just like horse riding!

have fun.

crunchy is often used about things that are fresh for instance crunchy carrot. crispy is often used about things that have been cooked in thin and brown slices. both crunchy and crispy things have a soft noise.