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Allergy problem
I'm craving for food like crab, squid and prawn. It's been a while since I last had all of them. Whenever I saw them whether cooked or uncooked, I'll I would go drooling. Seafood are is the best. Nothing can beat their its sweet, succulent taste. I still remember back then, I used to eat loads of seafood. I simply loved them it. At this time, they are it is the kind of food I should avoid. whatsoever, as they it gives me a allergy problem. and I could get a severe headache from eating them it.
I just can't accept the fact that now I can no longer have my favourite food. A cousin of mine has the same problem, but he never stopped eating seafood, despite getting allergic reaction after eating it. I'm not going to eat it though, because I hate feeling sick. I live in a country where seafood are is the most popular. This is terrible because I'm unable to have all any type of dishes with seafood in them it. Penang laksa is my favourite local food. Now I should learn to avoid it, because some cooks like to add shrimp paste to it which is bad for me.0 votedMay 25, 20126It's cold today...
It's too cold today. It's hard to stay outside. When I went home after school and was waiting for the bus, I couldn't stand the cold. I hope spring comes soon!
I love spring. Especially, I I especially like to watch cherry tree bloom. It is very beautiful. I like its pink petals. I will take pictures of it when it blooms and show you at this on italki.
Comment: "I like its pink petals." Good job using its instead of it's!0 votedMay 18, 20120Sunny Day
It's sunny and it's a little warm outside today despite it had has been cold and snowy these days lately. It's a good day to stay outside. I'm happy!
Comment: I combined two sentinces into one. Also, I changed had been to has been because you want to use the present perfect tense in this situation and not the past perfect.
You use had been when something begins in the past and is completed in the past
You use have been when something has begun at an unspecified time or began in the past and continues to the present.0 votedMay 18, 20120Good news!!!
My best friend passed the entrance examination of a college!
She have has wanted to enter the college since for 3 years. before I'm was glad to hear that news, and congratulated her. I like her very much, so I am will be also glad as if I pass the exam.
These days I study English, but it doesn't go well... So I think I will memorize English words again like in the biginning. It is important to go back to the basics.
Thank you for reading.
Please correct my writing.
Comment:
You are good at expressing yourself in English. You may want to study past tense and present tense a little more though. Good luck to you and your friend ^_^
がんばってね！
0 votedMay 18, 20120- I would start by learning things in categories... Animals, location words, colors, numbers, etc. Find words that would help you create sentences. Ex. Say you learn how to say I like something... Find words to fill in the blank. (I like cats would be watashi wa neko ga suki desu) Watashi - I Neko - cat Sukidesu - to like Ga - particle0 votedMay 17, 20120
