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The 21st century is surrounded by pressure of competition. So , if you want to have a successful life, you have to find a good job to keep your life quality better. But there is an ocean of job hunters in the world. how dare you said that you can get it?
Those people who believe that have university education could get a high salary job and lead to a successful life. If you want to apply for an appointment , most companies would check for your background education , they just care about your degrees and which university you are graduated. Some of them even want to know your progress in your school. You would have a chance to be interviewed if they are satisfied with your resume.But it is just the key of the door, the way of the success.However, the others think that university education is not an important factor of successful life, most people study in university just in order to get a certificate, they even do not know what have they learned in the past 4 years. Nowadays, ability is the importance for a man. For example, both Bill Gates and Steven Jobs stopped studying before they graduated from university. But they are still successful and even more successful than most people in the world.
In conclusion, I would say that it is not important to get a certificate of degree if you just want to lead a successful life. But if you want to learn useful things, improve yourself, university education could help you!0 votedMay 18, 20120Ja que nao vi nenhum brasileir/portugues postando aqui decidi corrigir.
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I am learning english because this is the language more utilized for everything. => Aqui eu falaria o seguinte "I am learning english because is the most spoken language in the world" - "Eu estou aprendendo ingles porque e a lingua mais falada no mundo", sendo que "more utilized" esta errado, deveria ser "most utilized" e mesmo assim esta a palavra certa para utilizar neste tipo de frase.
We need it for job, vacation, movies, and more. then, I hope someone can help me here. => Aqui esta tudo certo! Mas como sempre eu utilizaria "I hope someone could help me" simplesmente porque could=poderia, e parece mais politicamente correto :).
Seu ingles e muito bom, so precisa improvisar um pouco a gramatica.
0 votedMay 8, 20123Asking to leave -> don't know what you mean, but I think you want to quit your job, so you are writing a resign letter? I am going to do some corrections on this letter, if you have any questions please comment.
It's very hot today in Beijing, and it doesn't supply cool air at office, my seat is in front of the windows, so the sun shines directly to my back, which makes me uncomfortable, I feel sick, if I go to work, maybe I will get a sun burn (instead of sunstroke.)
After I hesitate, I decided to quit. Now I wake up and feel better than 3 hours ago. I wish property company could supply cool air as soon as possible!0 votedMay 4, 20120
