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Wow! this is amazing site for people who are poor in speaking other languages.
Actually, when I use some English sentences, I am not sure about my expressions. Specially when I want to write. Because when we talk with other people directly, we can understand even only a word.
But sentences are very hard to explain.
So, if someone can help for revising my essay, it will be a big help for me!
God bless you~ HAHAHA~~
<em>We learn</em> most from the <em>mistakes. It's ok to have mistakes as long as you continue to learn. </em>
<em>Have a nice day!
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