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hello,i'm lousy at english,hope to be good at it.ps,is this sentence fit the grammar?is there any spelling mistake?
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    好久不见


    好久不见,北京一天比一天冷,我受不了。

    好久不见。北京一天比一天冷,我受不了了。

    我最近比较忙。在我们的学校我们有很多作业和考试所以我没有时间出去玩儿,很可惜。

    我最近比较忙。我们有很多作业和考试,所以我没有时间出去玩儿,很可惜。

    我觉得下个月我会有空再参观北京或者别的地方。我经常跟我朋友去外边儿旅游。我们都是留学生所以我们对别的地方很好奇而且我们比较喜欢练习我们的中文。

    我希望下个月能有空再参观北京或者别的地方。我经常跟我朋友去外边儿旅游。我们都是留学生,所以我们对别的地方很好奇,而且我们喜欢(通过旅游这种方式)练习自己的中文。(Is that what you wanna express? Prectise Chinese through travelling and talk with people?)

    我希望冬天不那么冷。。。

    (Well, it's gona more cold in winter, totally different from your country.)

     

    YOU CHINESE IS VERY EXCELLENT !

    Have a nice day.

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    October 28, 2013
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    我还没天气习惯

    我还没习惯天气

    今天有大风,天气不错,有时候我恨去外面,因为天气变快了,而且冬天很长。

    今天有大风,天气不错。有时候我讨厌去外面,因为天气变冷【What's your original idea? cold (天气变冷)or changing fast(天气变化快)?】了,而且冬天很长。

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    October 16, 2013
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    考试 - 我应该学习

    考试-我应该学习一下

    明天我有全球化的考试,我应该准备。是英文的考试。可是我不喜欢复习,所以倒反我练习中文。

    明天我有全球化的考试,我应该准备一下。这次是英文的考试,可是我现在不想复习,所以反倒在练习中文。

    我是七年前考试的,我不知道怎么准备!幸好我没有文章的问题,只短问题。

    上一次考试还是在七年前,现在我都不知道怎么复习了!幸好我没有文章的问题,只有短问题(I don't understand this sentense. What's "short questions" means?)

    这堂课有很多话题。一些我认识,一些不认识。有时我觉得工作比大学更容易,没有考试。我偏向或者简报因为有多时间准备,可以上网,写书找到答案。我的同学偏向考试,因为他们觉得较少工夫。

    这堂课有很多话题。一些我认识,一些不认识。有时我觉得工作比大学更容易,因为没有考试。我更喜欢简报,因为有更多准备时间,可以上网、看书找到答案。但是我的同学偏向考试,因为他们觉得投入较少功夫。(It's amazing you know the word 工夫,but it's wrong word, the right one is 功夫.)

    明天我写考试的结果!

    明天我来写考试的结果!(来means future tense in chinese.)

    Have a nice day!

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    October 15, 2013
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    what should we do towards spoiled children Along with the advance of the society, more and more phenomenon are brought to our attention, one of which the public are attaching much importance to recently, is the absence of supervise from parents. Don’t spoil children, while it is true that there are large quantities of parents treat their children like little princesses or princes. For instance, sometimes when a child scream at public place, no one stop him. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds have diverse attitudes towards it. Some people hold the view that children will understand when they grow up, while other people advocate that they will become bad guys , on the contrary, if they were not be educated immediately. Apparently, a enormous number of people harber the idea that it’s unpleasant when impolite children disturb them , thus it’s true that bad manners children are annoy ,even if their parents may not thought equally. Moreover, some people alarm that if children‘s behaviors didn’t be corrected, they would misunderstand. Additionally, it is pointed out by several notable experts, parents should put an enormous premium on the bad manners. From my own perspective, spoiled children is so annoy and cause so many severe issues, thus we should say no to them. And we should struggle with the bad behaviors . To sum up, ,I cherish a belief that good manners of children not only make the children themselves get more award, but also make their parents be respect.
    October 11, 2013
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    October 9, 2013
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    How to deal with the air pollution Along with the advance of the society, more and more issues are brought to our attention, one of which the public are attaching much importance recently is the air pollution. Currently, while it is true that the pollution affect a lot of people, such as someone who has to work outside or someone who wants to take a jog. A enormous number of citizen insist the idea that air pollution effects their life, some people in the same time are in alarm that the pollution lead the increasing of lung cancer. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds have divergent reason to explain the reason why they hate it since it’s has no good aspect. The important part is how to deal with it. For instance, wear a breathing mask to decrease the bad factor. Exercise such as jog , however, may harm your lung in specific situation. For example when you jog you may had more air than usual. Thus you may stop exercise in foggy day. From my own perspective, I believe that the government should do something to stop this phenomenon getting worse. I cherish a belief that the blue sky and pleasant air , although might need effort of generations, will come back to city eventually.
    October 9, 2013
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    Friday is a good day everyweek,monday despair,wednesday is the draw,i feel full of hope,friday is sunrise,we eventually meet the liberation.oh i can have a lazy morning finally,thank god make the world in seven days!
    April 20, 2012
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  • Commented

    me too

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    April 19, 2012
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    what is a logical risk? is that a game like puzzle?

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    April 19, 2012
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    = =!what a dangours world^_^.What i want to do most,is  bungee jumping……

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    April 19, 2012
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